please update

I just finished your story. While I didn't read the first version I have to tell you how much I appreciated and enjoyed this one. I think that you nailed the characters from both shows within your story and I loved the attention to detail in the author's notes where you pointed out actors who had characters in both shows and tid-bits that you had tied into your story. Well Done!

Liked the end

I love the Prince bride and that line from Mandy. Though my favorite character in the whole movie was miracle max. I love Billy Crystal.
As for the case things seem to be moving along.

I'm really enjoying this! I read it the first time, but it's much easier to read since you've reposted. Thank you for sharing! :)

Aw he had Lou's wrist band. I'm sad now. T_T Excited to read what happens when they learn Spike's identity and his team comes. Great chapter, thanks for updating.

Great start. You've got me hooked already. I've seen some episodes of Flashpoint before and I love Ncis so this fic is gonna be pretty awesome .