|Reviews for Betrayal|
| Vilian chapter 1 . 6/3
| Tiser chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
| Nyxia chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
It was short but poweful!
I really love the last sentence! :)
Well done and i'm gonna read your others stories! :)
| Sailor Walnut chapter 1 . 7/9/2000
This was a very cool, passionate little story thing. The words were really powerful and eloquent. I liked it.
| alphabet chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Whoa...um...intense. But a very nice, very descriptive story!
| celia chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
it was pretty cool.