Reviews for Fate's Gift
missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 4/6/2016
Yes, I do feel as if I'm dangling from an evil cliffie. I was sort of hoping Harry would tell Hermione to MYOB, because there are some things he cannot tell her. Period. I was also hoping to see Umbridge get her just desserts and maybe even see Harry meet someone new to love who was not Ginny. (She is not my favorite for him, and I really disliked her here.)

I really wanted to know what was in each of the schools, although I suppose I can guess at the general content of some. I definitely want to know about that potion and more of the seeds Harry gave to Neville.

Hey, enquiring minds want to know.
missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 4/6/2016
Umbridge. I might have known. Shouldn't that Toad be taking a little stroll through the Veil? Surely she has enough crimes, including murder, to justify such a punishment.
missgsmith51 chapter 2 . 4/6/2016
This aspect of Hermione's es character - this demanding to know all of Harry's business - really irritates me. I can't imagine what it must be like to have someone constantly sticking his nose into my business and thinking he is entitled to the information just because it exists. I've worked with nosy parkers before, but she takes it to a whole new level. No wonder he cast that bubble around them all.

Ginny was really awful. I hope she stays his ex.
Me rule chapter 5 . 2/12/2016
elizzabethanddarcy chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
what did that document say? please?
serialkeller chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
I really like this but some parts are still annoying me in that he can't handle praise or the way he is so emotional all the time, hope that stops happening as often soon as he gets used to being back in the present. What did the potion do? All we get are more questions.
The Shadows Mistress chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
another good chapter
SherlokidSwan chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
Omg Harry looooves Rowena! 3
EmeraldGrey123 chapter 4 . 6/29/2014
Ugh, Umbridge, I hate her, I'm so glad Harry sorted her out!
Love this chapter, Teddy is so cute! :)
emthereble chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
love the chapter !
EmeraldGrey123 chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
This chapter was interesting, you've written it in such a way that I really enjoyed it, yet I've learned absolutely nothing that I didn't know from the last chapter! That's some skill you've got )
Can't wait for the next one!
The Shadows Mistress chapter 3 . 6/20/2014
Ginny never liked the pairings, good story , funny stuff with the goblins. keep it coming. looking forward to another chapter
teedub chapter 2 . 6/19/2014
interesting premise. I'm not too fond of this ginny...still a selfish child I see :-)
emthereble chapter 2 . 6/19/2014
wow this is an amazing plot !
EmeraldGrey123 chapter 2 . 6/19/2014
I would hex him too! D
This story is awesome, I can't wait for the third part!
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