Reviews for Beneath the Surface
Sakihinata chapter 4 . 1/2
Interesting scenario ;)
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
Plz update
B4bidden chapter 4 . 12/23/2017
this is such a great start for a story
Destineyofme chapter 4 . 12/4/2017
I hope you will write more someday on this lovely story
Ca.zaphira chapter 4 . 8/7/2017
Love the story. Hope you find your way back to finish it.
celajwhitney chapter 4 . 7/5/2017
this is fantastic! what happens next? please, please, please!
autumnbaby23 chapter 4 . 2/22/2017
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! I hate Alice!
autumnbaby23 chapter 3 . 2/22/2017
Great chapter!
autumnbaby23 chapter 2 . 2/22/2017
Poor Jasper!
autumnbaby23 chapter 1 . 2/22/2017
Loved it!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8/2017
I really like your story I hope you update soon, it's really enjoyable.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 4 . 10/27/2016
heheheheheeee, messing with Alice! Good fun, good start too! Well done!
edwards-sparrow chapter 4 . 10/24/2016
I hope you update again soon
Akatsuki'sBloodyNekoNinja chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
update soon please!
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 3 . 8/30/2016
I love it
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