Reviews for Beneath the Surface
Ca.zaphira chapter 4 . 8/7
Love the story. Hope you find your way back to finish it.
celajwhitney chapter 4 . 7/5
this is fantastic! what happens next? please, please, please!
autumnbaby23 chapter 4 . 2/22
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! I hate Alice!
autumnbaby23 chapter 3 . 2/22
Great chapter!
autumnbaby23 chapter 2 . 2/22
Poor Jasper!
autumnbaby23 chapter 1 . 2/22
Loved it!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8
I really like your story I hope you update soon, it's really enjoyable.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 4 . 10/27/2016
heheheheheeee, messing with Alice! Good fun, good start too! Well done!
edwards-sparrow chapter 4 . 10/24/2016
I hope you update again soon
Akatsuki'sBloodyNekoNinja chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
update soon please!
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 3 . 8/30/2016
I love it
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 2 . 8/30/2016
Wow that was awesome I love it.
Matthias L. Stormcrow chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
Awesome start I love it.
4evernaya chapter 4 . 8/17/2016
Some parts of the story are irreverent...well most parts...if she has the power of mind control it would make more since for her to tell the family to forget about Jasper and then leave...
Trld chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
I hope the "newborn" bites Alice
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