Is this continuing? This is so good.

Awesome idea to have Primal summons, I never really considered looking up if there was a story like that since I haven't played FFXIV in quite awhile. Though personally I would have preferred if instead of having the tribes that worship a Primal as a summoned army, that the summons would work like Summoner class in FFXIV, with the primal Egi having stages. Then the Boss Summons would be summoning the true body of the Primal. Either way, though, having a Primal Summoning Contract is a pleasant surprise so I don't mind how you've dealt with it, and my problem lies in that I'm not a huge fan of summon armies in general.

Tsunade should be able to adopt Naruto, since she could be considered a member of the Uzumaki clan. Don't really like the idea of the CIVILIAN council having a say in the upbringing of what amounts to a WMD (in the eyes of Shinobi). But I guess thems the breaks when it comes to abuse by Konoha fics.

trash author.

trash story.

garbage story, garbage author. learn how to write.

this is shit tier garbage writing. being this bad at writing would be impressive...if it wasnt so pathetic.

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" I thought you wanted to wait until he was older and ready to learn about his heritage, right?" This is when all those LIES are gonna start to come back to bite them all in the ass... The clan symbol on ALL naruto's clothes (that he's worn since he was a little, LITTLE kid) should have PROBABLY clued EVERYBODY in on his heritage.. That and the uzumaki stamina, the uzumaki last name... The chakra reserves being uzumaki level.. Kinda ALL BASICALLY SCREAM he IS an uzumaki.. I can only guess that even though kushina lived in konoha for 20 years, she APPARENTLY made NO friends and NOBODY knew she was with their LEADER and pregnant... (as the place really ISN'T large enough for that kinda lie to HOLD otherwise)... But when Kushina came BACK, they should have known "ALL PREVIOUS PLANS ARE NOW TRASH!". But to be honest, they WEREN'T THAT GOOD OF PLANS to begin with. (they all had some fairly LARGE holes in them).. I am not REAL clear on why he needs to go to his homeland all of a sudden, when he's BARELY got a handle on what he can ALREADY do... Not sure he needs ANOTHER pump up(considering we haven't even really seen what he can do with the lightning heart OR the wind heart and he hasn't even used shredder OR the dead bone pulse AT ALL yet, OR Kushina teaching him seals)... Shouldn't Kushina and/or his sister be going too? It's their homeland as well, after all. Any seals that would still be there, would be uzumaki made.. So Jiraiya has ABSOLUTELY NO HOPE IN HELL of doing anything to undo them... They'd need an Uzumaki.. and considering naruto HASN'T BEEN TRAINED IN THOSE YET... That SHOULD logically be, Kushina. The logic behind her NOT going... Is a little SUS... It just doesn't really "hold up".

This was cute... Nothing really to complain about here.. Nothing confused me either.. This was honestly just a cute little addendum.

So exactly HOW is kushina broke? Didn't she have an entire LIFETIME of money built up? And had a CLAN that dates back to the FIRST hokage (that had their own VILLAGE and COUNTRY!)...Plus being the wife and kids of the fourth! Seems to me, that she, Natsumi and Naruto should be ROLLING in cash...

Actually the Uzumaki clan is not just alive... It's alive and WELL.. FIVE MEMBERS is actually pretty "beefy" for a supposed "dead" clan. And TECHNICALLY with Kushina never being dead and Karin being a LITTLE older then Naruto with Natsumi being a LITTLE younger... There has never been a BREAK in the clan being "multiple members" strong. The uchiha by CONTRAST... Has only 3 members... One of which is sick and dying and another is a eunuch *held together with plant-man parts*...So THREE "guys" which are all "broken" in various ways and dying...

HOW is danzo here? He's already been CAUGHT kidnapping kushina... Holding her and her daughter... Spying on the hokage (you had his root get BUSTED IN THE ROOM)... Root is also supposed to be decommissioned... As in gone... If he hasn't... Then RIGHT THERE is treason!... Plus danzo was FIRED from his "adviser" position after the failed uchiha rebellion. Not many knew about danzo being the head of root?.. Um yeah... Just about EVERY ninja seems to know about that... How was he supposed to get "clan members" if the clan heads DIDN'T? Or all the ANBU, the heads of basically ALL divisions.. And just about EVERYBODY in the council room knew ALL ABOUT ALL THAT. Besides, if you HAVEN'T noticed.. Konoha is about as good at KEEPING secrets, as a screen door is at keeping water out, on a submarine. (probably has something to do with EVERYONE in konoha, constantly EXPLAINING everything to everybody else.. Even if the other people have ABSOLUTELY NO BUSINESS knowing anything about said topics)

"now you can get rid of some idiots without having to give a false reason."... And yet your had sarutobi DO NOTHING AT ALL... To ANYBODY... I do NOT understand this rationale. False reason, real reason... You don't EVER have the hokage handing out ACTUAL punishment TO ANYBODY! He's "Nero, playing the fiddle while Rome BURNS".. Or "the people on the titanic, rearranging the deck furniture, while the ship sinks.". and with the not saying anything about the sharringan on the kyuubi.. Or "hiding" danzo even MORE (for some really WEIRD reason... And the fact the anbu that actually GOT kushina and natsumi would have ALREADY talked.. As would THOSE TWO).. It's just covering lies with more and more lies.. How does he NOT know this is going to END VERY BADLY for him? The shit's getting "deep enough", I dunno how everyone is expected to keep all the lies straight. With whom knows what, about any given situation. Especially given that he's mostly SENILE himself.

"they won't be able to detect us slipping in"...? So you brought the "detection barrier, created by Mito Uzumaki", back and removed it in the same chapter?.. Interesting choice.

"A good distance away, Kabuto grinned and began the Genjutsu that would put most of the stadium to sleep."... Wait... WHAT? Didn't you JUST have Ifrit and the four lizard men KNOCK OUT Kabuto and THREW HIM TO THE ANBU to take away... He was UNCONSCIOUS... Away from the arena, AND under arrest from the anbu... How the heck does this part happen? Did you forget all that? Because it was earlier THIS chapter. You had the summons ROCK kabuto's entire world and then... Just RESET IT? I'm confused... What was even the POINT to all of that "fight", if you were just going to hit the reset button and put it all back to status quo? The summons could "somehow" sense Kabuto... But ALSO "couldn't" sense kabuto? Since he was a "corpse"...So it DID know about kabuto, BUT not that "kabuto" was a fake?.. Or they DID know?... I'm lost here.

"Why worry about stealth when I am immortal?" um.. Because immortality doesn't help AT ALL with other people... Because immortality is worthless if everyone is against you.. Because immortality is kinda worthless to accomplish any plan of any kind... Because "shinobi" are SUPPOSED to be "shadows" and stealth SHOULD be ground into ALL their brains (it ISN'T.. But one would think it kinda SHOULD be, since they are NINJA). *supposedly MASTERS of stealth, that REALLY never use stealth*

A few other issues.. Not sure why naruto doesn't just borrow some of kurama's power and bum rush right THROUGH shikaku... 9 is ALWAYS going to be able to overpower 1... That's basic math... Then the kage fight.. Um.. Kushina is here.. She's a SEAL MASTER... This shouldn't even really be a challenge to just get rid of the barrier and undo the edo. So NOT really a fight.. In fact with a seal master, Orochimaru should want to get the FLOCK OUTTA THERE.. Before she just "undoes" his immortality/body switching technique and renders him just a corpse. Having a LIVING uzumaki around is BAD, REALLY, REALLY bad for him.

Actually, it wouldn't matter if sasuke had two tomoes or three... The Jiongu is a "bloodline ability" and the sharringan CANNOT copy those... No bloodline abilities *wood use, ice, jiongu, dead bone pulse, body modifications, bijuu chakra moves, rinnegan powers, dederia's explosive powers, hiden's powers* the sharringan can't copy ANY of them. Just "normal" jutsu... Gen and nin. (but oddly enough, according to canon, NOT fuin)... So really, with naruto "collecting" bloodlines... Is far BEYOND the uchiha already.

I'm also not REAL clear on HOW IN THE HECK nobody knows that Naruto is the son of the fourth, with Kushina out in the public.. Shouldn't it be DEAD EASY to know now? That KINDA shoots ALL "secrecy" right dead in the head, doesn't it? And yeah.. There is most DEFINITELY an "uzumaki clan" now.. Considering there are 4 members*FIVE if you count tsunade as part uzumaki* and 1 is MALE while the others are female (kinda shows there very well COULD be more FULL BLOODED members in the future).. Meanwhile the uchiha has ONE.. Just one member... That's NOT "a clan"... Not anymore.

Actually, watch "bonds" or the later episodes of Shippuden (Pein arc and above)... Naruto CAN fly when using the fox's chakra. It's tails form a sort of "wings". So yeah, even in canon, naruto can fly with kurama's help. *kinda like sasuke's level 2 curse seal "hands" let him fly too*.

So naruto has the chidori too now, right? Because sasuke just "sped through the handsigns for the chidori"... And naruto has the sharringan active! So... He HAS the chidori now, that's how that works! That's really the ONLY thing that "eye-infection" is good for, after all. Sasuke couldn't beat naruto when naruto DIDN'T have the sharringan and the Jiongu.. Now? It should be LAUGHABLY easy for naruto to stomp him! *haven't seen the dead bone pulse yet either*, but REALLY naruto should only need ONE bloodline in order to totally and completely CRUSH the uchiha... Let alone THREE. That's just kinda OVERKILL. AND WHY IN THE WORLD would kakashi teach the dumb-ass uchiha an ASSASSINATION technique? That's NOT used to "protect" anything, let alone people... It's just ASININE.

"Neji said as he charged at Hinata. He threw several fast strikes that forced Hinata to utilize Anko's evasion training" HOW is he attacking with ANY speed? He's only able to use ONE ARM... You had hinata close all the points on ONE ARM at the start... That means the gentle fist cannot work through it.. ERGO.. ONE ARM!

Actually, Hinata could have won in LESS then one move... She could have won with ONE HANDSIGN, at anytime... Everyone seems to forget that.

Negji's whole "fate thing" has some pretty hardcore problems...One: his eyes DON'T see the future, and they see the past/present imperfectly... Two: the very concept of fate he clings to is kinda against him... The Hyuuga ELDERS got his dad dead (as far as he knows at this point).. BUT they have been decreed powerless because NONE of them are the "clan head" and thus they DON'T MATTER.. Plus they have all grown OLD and VERY WEAK... So I dunno why his rage isn't TARGETING THEM. Their "fate" (their TRUE fate actually).. Is to be ABSOLUTELY WORTHLESS, unimportant, impotent, feeble, and utterly inconsequential... BUT they are the ones that killed his father. (and everyone scurries around). You'd THINK that would give him motivation to get rid of THEM before the 3 year old that was kidnapped. (you could say they had the seal to use against him.. BUT so does hinata, her dad, her sister and mother... So that doesn't really work here). Unfortunately, what MOST (almost ALL) authors seem to not realize.. Is if they are going to confine their stories TO THE VILLAGE.. It needs ALTERED A LOT... NONE of the "enemies" mean ANYTHING.. They are ALL BEYOND pathetic.. They were meant as "filler".. "one-offs"... They just DON'T WORK. The authors need to change their stories to reflect that... Danzo, elders, clan elders, civilians.. Etc.. ARE JUST "wack-a-moles"... They mean nothing, can DO nothing and are just there to CRUSH.. They are just basically "cockroachs" that can be SMASHED easily by really ANYONE with "real" power.. Sannin, jounnin, anbu, naruto, the diamyo, the hyuuga clan head or immediate family and of COURSE the senile, monkey-shit kage.