Reviews for Master of Jiongu |
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![]() ![]() nice chapter. i like how you write naruto as a child with childlike manners, like screaming when it:s time for ramen for something exciting it makes a more colorful character that is fun to read |
![]() ![]() whoa this made an impact already! poor baby naruto ugh why must he suffer this way. the way you portray the characters are already impressing me. bb naruto hugging the frog just made my heart melt and cry he just wanted a friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dual wielding katanas? bruh isn't the usual way to dual wield a katana and a wakizashi? also why do they use dollars not ryo |
![]() ![]() BEST. FANFICT. EVER |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, dont mean to be rude but. when are you going to post the next chapter? btws, love the fic. keep up the good work, thanks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing. I'd expect no less from such an amazing writer like you |
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![]() ![]() i just wanted to say that fu said nanabi was shouting hes fathers successor but nanabi along with nibi and rokubi is female |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man this is getting so damn good I can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() maybe have naruto have all the collective knowledge of the Kyuubi and everyone who gave chakra to save his life...? Or does the knowledge thing only work when MC takes their heart? time will tell... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue com essa história por favor tá muito legal mesmo eu amei essa história por favor |
![]() ![]() Danzo hasn't been a part of a "council" since the uchiha massacre. After all, technically he SHOULD have been put to death for that little fiasco. (since he did kinda commit TREASON and got CAUGHT doing it). (but the hokage being completely spineless, just "FIRED" him from the council). Danzo ALREADY screwed up with the kidnapping, and they had TONS of evidence ALREADY! Remember it was DAYS after the informant told him, that the hokage got the rescue launched and there was an ENTIRE SQUAD there to gather evidence with!(this is the SECOND huge screw up/treason thing Danzo's ACTUALLY BEEN CAUGHT RED-HANDED IN). So basically hiruzen's "spine" (for lack of a better term, for invertebrates) crumbled AGAIN and no council member gets punished? (AGAIN)... Never understood why itachi and kisame are even THERE for naruto... He's gotta be added LAST (they don't even have ONE tailed-beast yet, so they are FAR AND AWAY from being able to use him) |