Reviews for Master of Jiongu
Pvtcheeks chapter 16 . 1/14
See, now apparently hinata could sneak up on him somehow even though he was supposedly able to see theough a fucking sannin. We’re diving deeper off the edge of forced plot and writing
Pvtcheeks chapter 15 . 1/14
*facepalm*… of course it’s kamui… I mean, I’m one for all the power, shringan yes please, byakugan, of course, bone release, anyfday of the week. Everything. But him unlocking the mangyeko by seeing her near death, is just way to far fetched man.

Not only that, but MS, I’m assuming his is EMS because Kurama, and Uzumaki genes, is supposed to be unique to each person, with amaterasu and tsukuyomi being the only exceptions.

Like you could have just made him move his body ever so slightly so that it woulnt pierce a mask, because it still wouldnt be leathal for him. Again I’m not flaming you, just miffed it feels so forced
Pvtcheeks chapter 15 . 1/14
…okay, I’m pulling random fucking logic from MY ass, so I van continue reading at this point.

1: Hiruzen, along with multiple ANBU that are most definitely watching, are very adept sensors, and since Kurama is using Narutos senses to determine these things, I’m calling fucking huge bs that he can see through A SANNIN, while others, far greater in senses, than him, experience, and are actual sensors.

2: If he really could sense the damn sannins chakra, THEN HOW THE FUCK DOES HE ONLY HAVE ELITE JONIN RESERVES?! HUH?! Dude, you seriously gotta give me more than that, because this seriously is just plain, janky.
Pvtcheeks chapter 12 . 1/14
Really?… I dont know man, this is jist, way to damn forced. How the fuck did Kushina survive the Kyuubi driving a nail that left a basketball sized hole in her fucking sternum, all the while somehow has the othwr half of Kurama in her, EVEN THOUGH, Minato used THE REAPER FUCKING DEATH SEAL, to take it with him? Can’t wrap my head around that one chief
Pvtcheeks chapter 11 . 1/13
DUDEEEEE how the hell did a B-rank, DRAIN NARUTO?!
Pvtcheeks chapter 11 . 1/13
…..? Did you just day Naruto, was pushed to exhaustion from a B-rank jutsu…really?
Pvtcheeks chapter 4 . 1/12
Oooof, lol, this was rhe one side if Hiruzen I really despised. While the leaf might not be as harshly militaristic as the rest of the villages, you are the fucking Hokage, you get the final say, so really this is because you were scared of rocking the boat. I get it, the Kyuubi attack killed droves of shinobi, but I dont understand keeping him low profile because if your worried about assassins killing him, you already have a problem of not believing in your own forces, just saying man XD.

I won’t complain about what he’s having him do, BUT, its totally over the top in being a pussy deparment. You guys are the only villge that has the seal mito placed around it, so there shouldnt be any reason he should have to worry aboutnoutside forces. Just hide him when any other village comes, thats ez.

The council makes a fuss, kill ‘em, there are plenty of other civilians I’m positive are just as good if not better at what they do lol. Again not flaming the author, because thus is totally in line with Hiruzens chracter, I’m flaming Kishimoto if anything XDD
S chapter 32 . 1/12
your a good author and you wrote a good story the only thing I dislike is the bashing but otherwise it’s good and well written I hope you get better and start uploading again soon
ScythH02 chapter 32 . 11/29/2023
Too bad this story is dead. It was a lot of fun to read and reread over the years.
extremoMMV chapter 32 . 10/2/2023
I wouldn't say you're a failure of a writer, this has been an awesome fanfic overall, but if you're going through mental and personal problems, then it is ok to not update
Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2023
Bullshit bullshit bullshit bullshit. It’s a ninja village you stupid writer. The ninjas have complete authority. Kill the civilians that break the rules.
Magicthunder1 chapter 2 . 9/16/2023
I think the hokage is acting alittle out of character.
Damien Evermere chapter 1 . 9/11/2023
the man is a tyrant he can do what he likes
yourfoxydope chapter 7 . 9/3/2023
pls delete this literary trash
yourfoxydope chapter 4 . 9/3/2023
SO BIG CRINGE
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