Reviews for Master of Jiongu
Marco Zilvetti chapter 7 . 5/11/2024
This fic should be named it as "When Hiruzen does the right things about rising and training Naruto"
Markan999 chapter 8 . 5/3/2024
I love Naruto's relationship with Hyugaa Family
Markan999 chapter 7 . 5/3/2024
Man, Kakashi is a great character but he sucks as a teacher, I can undersrand why he concentrated only on Sasuke, Sakura was useless and Naruto was too green, he only know how to spam clones while shouting about being Hogake, I get that but it was Kakashi's job taught him how to be a proper shinobi.
Marco Zilvetti chapter 1 . 5/3/2024
I really like Kakuzu as a character and his abilities, he was the most badass Akatsuki in my opinion using his five hearts alongside with the five natures of elements.
nagiten chapter 6 . 4/5/2024
you said they had to last at least 2 minutes and after that they can quit? so why did iruka call time at only 2 minutes
nagiten chapter 5 . 4/5/2024
so the council work in keeping the fact it was uzumaki senju and uchiha that founded the leaf quiet hmm and no lessons on uzumaki or uzu hmm
nagiten chapter 2 . 4/5/2024
so the council screwing naruto over hmm
is that why naruto think only hokage and the ramen stand people are the only ones that dont hate him? and why he go cant to his father friends house every once in a while? also where the hell is tsunade in the adult who like him?
why doesn't tsunade just take him as they have blood similar been cousins
Pinkypi chapter 11 . 2/8/2024
How the civilian snuck up to get to Naruto. Everything was a clusterfuck. The ninja's are running on little sleep as is at the moment. The people in the room are acting restless with a lot of moving around due to the announcement. The Anbu is question wasn't expecting someone to so blatantly ignore the Hokage in such a way. Said civilian was already positioned in a spot near the Anbu making his travel path shorter and therefor less likely to be noticed with all the other jostling going on. Particularly if said civilian was being one of the more calm people in the room making him seem like he was accepting the Hokage's words and was less riled up than the others when he really wasn't. He also happened to make his move as the attention in the room was drawn in the opposite direction. Also said civilian may be an academy drop out. Meaning he knew at least something about right moment to strike etc.
Pinkypi chapter 4 . 2/7/2024
still one of my favorite stories for the 4th read through. Though I just realized it. You've got Sasuke acting like an emo which didn't happen until after the massacre. Kappa.
dennishoisington2 chapter 32 . 2/1/2024
Can you please continue this story I would be greatly honored if you could!
Pvtcheeks chapter 20 . 1/14/2024
Ah I see, you realized that made no sense to not copy that down so you made that even though Kurama help make it, it stil can’t be translated with out the rinnegan… W
Pvtcheeks chapter 19 . 1/14/2024
BRO WHAT?! WHY THE FUCK WPULD YOU NOT READ UP ON THE FUCKING RINNEGAN?! WHAT?!
Pvtcheeks chapter 19 . 1/14/2024
Right, just muttered root right infront of him and is hiding that it is danzo, because hes the only damn one who would do that, or the more likely one, somehow Hiruzen reallt doesnt know, which makes sense in auch abysmal amounts, you make the OG naruto look like he was the smartest person in the whole series…
Pvtcheeks chapter 18 . 1/14/2024
…he couldnt see him… with the MS…right
Pvtcheeks chapter 16 . 1/14/2024
Okay, now I’m confused, does his sister not have the pther half of the Kyuubi? If not then how does she have the whisker marks?
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