Reviews for Blister in the Sun
Guest chapter 10 . 8/10
um...contradiction much? Shes seen him fucking cry over alice! so why did she say shes never seen him cry before? AND that last line...that's the line Edward said after he had sex with alice.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/10
did he really fucking say that? I need to show alice? and Edward crying over alice? huh...guess bella really was wasting her fucking time! Edward wouldn't be crying like a bitch if he didn't love that skank
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10
Why does Edward always have great sex with other people but bella gets shitty sex with other guys whilst pining after Edwards whoring ass? HUH?

And now with that alice and Edward lemon (fucking nasty by the way) its all just ruined...like theres nothing that Edward can do or say to bella that would be new...hes already done and said everything with that hoe bag alice
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10
I'm sorry...wtf? Edward and ALICE? WTF? and he sure seems to like her doesn't he...omg that's so fucking gross!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/12/2016
Wow...just wow- thank u for writing :)
Twiolic chapter 10 . 5/30/2016
Very much enjoyed this story.
cheshire15 chapter 10 . 5/28/2016
Awwwww
MeBHop chapter 10 . 5/26/2016
any hope for a sequel? i'd love to see how they make it work!
boopgirl chapter 10 . 5/8/2016
Good luck
3kdz4me chapter 10 . 5/6/2016
Whew! That was a hard, hot ride!
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen chapter 9 . 5/2/2016
Your story is hard to understand. I am so confuse. Don't know who POV are one minute I thought Bella talk to Edward and she talk with jasper.
shaz308 chapter 10 . 5/2/2016
Good luck with the vote on Twifanfiction recs. I'd love to see an epilogue chapter for this story one day, thanks.
TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Blister In The Sun has been nominated in the poll to find the Top 10 fics completed in April at www . twifanfictionrecs . com
Ali OMalley Cat chapter 10 . 4/23/2016
Ugh! Broke my heart and fixed it back together in just one chapter! I love pretty girl
Vamps09 chapter 10 . 4/9/2016
Loved the story!
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