Reviews for War Games 2: Planet Prison |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Never thought I would invest myself so much into a fanfic like I have with this series. I love it it’s dragged me in and I’ve sent all of my free time reading it. It’s amazingly writen and I can’t wait for the next update. I only wish that there would be a little more John x Kelly but other then that it’s amazing, keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() Reached the end of this story so far. Really enjoying the adventure and excitement. Hope to see more from u. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() Hope to see more from you in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things went FUBAR pretty fast! Sounds like the flood has evolved. Throughout the story the detail is superb without being overbearing. I was confused no one recognized flood when they first encountered the stench and moss. |
![]() ![]() Good chapter, nice to see you back |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ace chapter but better not be such a huge cliff hanger :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read through both stories, and I have to say I'm loving it. I think you have written a great story with great character development. I'm enjoying how even though there is focus on the Master Chief, you have given awesome exposition on the rest of blue team. I only have on tiny issues/critique, and it's about Linda dealing with the Flood. In my opinion, I think she would have gone straight to the infirmary and explained her pain, and I also believe there should have being some sort of containment protocol for all of those who were in contact with Flood. Overall thoigh, you are doing wonderful. I hope you continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so excited to see a new chapter. Great job! But please don't kill Linda, because that would be very sad. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that's not good. I thought those filters kept things out. Sounds like she has something growing in her lung. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone seems very unconcerned that she spat flood jizz out. Like that stuffs stupidly virulent, no ones worried about that? Good chapter though. |
![]() ![]() This story is INFINITELY smarter, more emotional, and better written than Halo 5 was. Kudos |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bloody hell Kelly, just turn all off, yeah, smart. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like it would have been a lovely planet to explore, if it wasn't for the local flood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh yes a new chapter! I missed your updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |