Whatre you gonna do with the Spartan's Pieceful Heartbeat/Spartan's Loyal Heartbeat timeline, im curious because the way it drops off is rather upsetting

Hurry up and update already. I'm dying to read the rest of the story!

Loved the detailed action with the attack on the pirate ship! There's always so much going on but you wove it together very smoothly. Now I'm intrigued with this unknown system. Reminds me of an old Star Trek shore leave. Will you have John go dirt side also? He needs a break...

Got to say not a huge fan of this chapter. Especially with the several hours to get dirt side bit, when a drop is unlikely to take more then a few minutes considering you drop from orbit onto target. Still though decent filler.

Update

So I'm a little behind on what's been happening on this site, and I'll have to be sure to give you a few more reviews on the original story - but I just wanted to say I'm so glad to see you're continuing 'War Games'! You have an excellent writing style and you portray the multitude of characters involved very well. My only suggestion right now is that you might want to add Blue Team's character tags to this story - I'd hate for people to miss out on seeing it because it doesn't show up in a search for stories about John and Kelly. :) All the best.

as good as ever and well worth the wait

He should have stopped her! This was so wrong. I know John has a mission but now the survivors will be more traumatized. Couldn't John have enough authority to process adoptions himself?

Ace chapter, too long in the wait. Eagerly waiting for more :)

Can't wait for an update. I can't wait for Kelly and the chief to finally realize they love each other and admit it.

Dude you got a follower, loved the first onr and now this as well, want to see morr fred and linda action as well! Also the interplay between the spartans and marines is great

Good chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Hey, this is a wonderful story. I think you did a nice job characterizing John and Kelly, along with keeping a steady story progression with interesting conflicts. But I think maybe you could add more characterization and appearance to the 4 Spartans. Maybe allow them to have a mission or two together, training session, or something. Especially on John and Kelly in my opinion. This is one of the best stories I've read on the internet and really hope you choose to continue.

Could of done with more of a focus on the soldiers and action I think as well as what you wrote, but I liked it :)

Now that's what I call efficient! Great rescue and no one lost! Now to find the others... Transition to freedom will be difficult I'm afraid.