If I was you Id specify come traffic marks it as a pirate ship, at the moment it looks like they just attack the first Jackle ship in system just in case its a pirate. No other issues and I loved the chapter, the banter at the end made me laugh out loud. :)
(I am that Kellise yes by the way, just cant be bothered to log in at the moment!)

You made a very good opening chapter for Part 2 here. Things flow smoothly, and you kept the S-IIs in-character too. I gotta say the simulation part was very creative and that your OCs are... lively!

Ace, only one issue is when youre doing the sim you put a hit by a dark from the wall. No other issues and an amazing chapter.

Great beginning! Good to see Maximus is enforcing personal time for John and that John will still get a good workout. But the "paperwork" just never ends. Sigh...

Wow, looks like John had a rough day. Very nice, I love it so much, especially the simulations. Fucking A! :D

I want to say a perfect way to start a sequel to war games. I think you achieved a almost perfect transition from where you left off to where the new story began. I liked this chapter a lot.

Flamin'Moya14

this was so much fun, I love it! especially the part when the soldier said where are my pant? I couldn't stop laughing