Reviews for The One Appointment We All Must Keep |
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Vegasman59 chapter 10 . 1/16/2018 Albuts Dumbass Dumbledore has totally lost track of the plot Andrew his mind, this is brilliant! |
Vegasman59 chapter 8 . 1/16/2018 Sirius vs. Lucius winner Black Molly vs. Arthur toss up Dumbass Dumbledore having a bad time is a given...LOL |
Vegasman59 chapter 6 . 1/16/2018 It would be better if Harry played in the game but you can not have everything... LOL |
Vegasman59 chapter 5 . 1/16/2018 Oh the Head Bastard isn't gonna be happy with this... LOL |
Vegasman59 chapter 1 . 1/15/2018 Well you're making changes,it has got to change the story line and make it a different story. I like it so far! |
Guest chapter 17 . 1/14/2018 I'm glad you're still writing this. I just wanted you to know that I've really enjoyed reading this and can't wait until the next chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
BMS chapter 2 . 1/12/2018 oK, your Harry is as dense as a rock. Good luck but I'm out |
BMS chapter 1 . 1/12/2018 Great start, very funny. I will say you're bashing Harry pretty hard on the trip thru the ally, When he didn't take the hint from the multiple signs and Rasputin (nice touch there) took over his mouth to make him get the key. Which reminds me: "May I hand it over" . . You just had Harry ask if he could give Hagrid the key which he doesn't have. It should be: "May I have it" or "Hand it over" though the 2nd would sound like a demand, rather odd coming from an 11 yr. old child to an adult. Harry does remember his visit and his agreement, doesn't he? |
Ladyfiremane chapter 17 . 1/4/2018 Just came across this jewel of a story and wanted to thank you for such a wonderful story that had me reading it straight through. I hope you continue with story. Looking forward to your next update. |
G Fawkes chapter 17 . 1/3/2018 Nooooooooooooooooo! I did NOT realize this wasn't complete...or that the author had not updated since 9/27. That's what I get for reading all day, trying to (mostly) avoid teacher wife and my boy home for snow/cold day. |
GF chapter 15 . 1/2/2018 No. Let Ginny say anything she wants , and let the offended Slytherins KICK the ever living sh*t out of her. |
gf chapter 12 . 1/2/2018 I don't know French for crap, but I think your bathroom 'on suite', is really the adopted french 'en-suite'.. |
GF chapter 12 . 1/2/2018 Why does Draco have to sleep off being stunned?! It bothers me to no end that JKR invented (canon) the term 'ennervate' and THEN- after en seven books and 20 billion dollars or whatever, retracts the word, 'cuz someone says re-ennervate is better, and then a bunch of morons are writing 'rennervate', twenty years later from the first book release. I will NEVER use rennervate. Canon is canon. Some of the stuff they do and say on Star Trek and Star Wars is stupid, but no one ever CHANGES the words. Buncha' p*ssy *ssed, soccer playing, bike helmet wearing, 'look I got a participation trophy', never been punched, "I'm tellin' my lawyer", butt kissing wussies! |
GF chapter 11 . 1/2/2018 "Balmy" is like, the weather report, or something. "Its a balmy 78 degrees, not a cloud in the sky, and the wind is 5 mph" Barnabas the BARMY, the nutjob, tried to teach TROLLS- ballet! Barmy meany 'nutsy kokowitz', or sumthin'. _ Empty false gold throne?! You wrote 'the throne was gone, and the middle chair looked JUST like all the others' (para) |
GF chapter 11 . 1/2/2018 YES! Thank you! Finally, a writer with some sense! "...a school with nearly 300 students in it..." WAYYYYYY to many (cough, idiots, cough) think there are 600, 800, THOUSANDS of kids in this school! There are FORTY wizlets in Harry's grade. Times seven grades, adding a realistic type number for each older class, as the war was getting worse and worse. Thanks for being, uh, realistic, uh, in your, um, a/u, fictional, er, magical school for witches and wizards. Well... put that way it hardly seems important, but... I like that you thought about it. |