Reviews for The One Appointment We All Must Keep
Brian1972 chapter 4 . 7/2/2014
Wasn't the deal that Harry won't really remeber his instructions that clearly?

So why brother to give him clear instructions or scold him for his choises in this dreamsessions? Its not like he will learn from it.

For the matter of completet stories that use the death return theme there are some. F.e.:
s/5695544/1/Harry-Potter-and-Afterlife-Inc

Your approach allows for some nice changes to the common timetravel & revenge stories. Your Harry is not really aware of future Rons potion crimes, so he has no need to punish young Ron for his future selfs crimes. Since circumstances can have an hughe impact on life a Huffelpuff Ron who is not Harry Potters best mate might choose an other path.
mageofmyth chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
Great update. I am glad to see Ron leaving Harry alone. I am also ecstatic to see Harry openly questioning why the school is such a deathtrap. He should write to the Prophet and give an interview about how he is starting to not feel safe at Hogwarts.
RCPMione chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
nice update, look forward to the next!
Hortensia chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
Good chapter! You asked for sites with HP-related info, I’ll try to write them down so you can find them. FFN tends to mess with outside links, so bear with me. Have a look at Mugglenet (dot com), they have a very wide variety of information. Another one would be Whitehound (dot co dot uk), you can find many essays and links under the fanfiction heading. There you also find the fanfiction follies that contain a lot of good information. Some examples: common spelling/grammar mistakes, how do real British aristocrats behave (and Malfoy certainly isn’t one…). The Britpicker’s Guide is also very useful.

And some spelling mistakes: the bank is called Gringotts, not Gringhott; Neville’s last name is spelled Longbottom, not Longbottem; Blaise’s last name is Zabini, not Zambini.
Ronin Kenshin chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
really cool so far like your version you've done some real changes that i can't wait to see where they go great work
Yaw6113 chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Please write next chapter already. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. Thank you very much.
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
good work but i always have problems with fic like this i mean there pretty much the same mione is his soul mate he has to return with only his memories and that it big deal he still only has 5to 7 years of experience at magic going against a wizard supposably over a centurym\ old not to metion those he trusted and don't forget riddle hole thing fishy to me that said i do like your fic so far can't wait to see your take on it
tanilc chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Great update. Really glad Ron got smacked by the troll
god of all chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Angel wolf11021 chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
I love the story!
geetac chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
I like the chapter
Rhiannon Wretch chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
I really, really like this. No excessive, blatant, unneeded bashing - not that I don't like those stories because I'm not huge Weasley fans, but this one is refreshing.

Well done on this and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
austinsmom chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
another great update, I am not sure on websites for Harry Potter info but the Harry Potter wikipedia should work it depends on if you are going off the books or movies really wiki/Harry_Potter
Ayra13 chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Goodness you are good! I want more, and soon! (please, since that was kinda rude)
Ophelia Joane chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
Love this story, and am so glad you started Harry and Hermione out as friends first, instead of instantly making them a couple. Those types of stories irk me. Can't wait for the update!
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