Reviews for Harry Potter: The Avenger |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As far as sequels go, I can see three. First, Utron did try to engineer an extinction event. They would help. Second, Thanos just needs to DIE! Seriously if you are in love with Death just kill yourself. You'll meet quickly. Would the killing curse bypass Thanos defenses? Third, an epilogue of sorts, Harry and Natasha have children who are magical. A chapter or three with scenes from their lives would be fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always love a good Harry Avenger story, and this one was a good one, even if a little short. However, the important parts were laid out and there could always be other spin offs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really strong first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see a continuation of this. Especially if you can follow up on how Nat described T.A.H.T.I. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story Thanks for sharing it with us |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Nat's side job Good thinking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry and Natasha are great together in this story. |
![]() ![]() I really wish, that people would not misuse /mix-up terms. Thor is either a god (of Nordic mythology) or god-like being / advanced alien being, worshipped centuries ago by Nordic people. He is NOT a demi-god! A demi-god, as the prefix demi (half) indicates, is someone with a god parent and a non-god parent, a half-blood like Hercules or Percy Jackson. Anyways, I really like your story and the way you tell not only of the acts but also the thoughs / background of your characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe it’s the logical side of me nitpicking here but considering Natasha told Loki after his initial incarceration that she has “red” in her ledger, would she really quit S.H.I.E.L.D. when she feels like she has a debt to society for the things she did as a black widow (going off the “Black Widow” movie here). I didn’t get the feeling that she was only referring to Clint as having the debt since Loki replies with something about “erasing that much red.” IDK, just a random thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If other reviewers have said the same thing then sorry for being repetitive but you wrote the “Pepper meets Harry and Natasha” scene as though Pepper and Nat didn’t spend most of ‘Iron Man 3’ bumping heads. As many times as I’ve read this story I never picked up on that before. That probably goes to show how you’re such a good storyteller that I was too wrapped up in the narrative to think about what’s happened a couple years earlier. Good job! On an unrelated note; why is the name : Romanova being substituted for “Romanoff?” Even if “Romanova” was her name in literature (and I’m not saying it was) but if that’s the reason I thought this story was based on the MCU movies, not the comics? And, I hope you don’t expect me to imagine Daniel Radcliffe as Harry. Nothing against him personally or professionally but he looks nothing like the “Harry” I always saw in my head when reading the books. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whose voice are you supposed to hear … David Hasselhoff? Lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite stories and I don’t just mean by you. I mean overall. My all time favorite is‘The British Reformation’. Gotta love that Fleur! So, I’ve read this multiple times and it never struck me as odd until this read. Near the beginning of the story, Harry says he only has two choices and that they were pretty much the same choice. But what about going back to the muggle world? I don’t mean giving up magic but not really living in the wizarding world. Not working there or living there. I’m sure there is a muggle job he could use magic for to make it easier or even modify someone’s memory into putting him on the payroll but not have to show up for work. And if he’s ultra-rich from whatever his parents and Sirius left him then spend several years traveling and relaxing. Meet beautiful women and make love to them; sky’s the limit! I’m just saying that immediately jumping to possible suicide if the archway isn’t a portal to another world is a bit foolhardy. But I understand the need for an illogical reason to get the story up and running. And I’m glad it did, too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you do a killer job of making a special scene romantic mean something with out having to go full blown spicy. this is why your one of my fav authors and i read all your work, sometimes more than once. bravo. btw harry trek 2 is good keep it up |