I came here from 'Benefits of Old Laws', and I must say your story has been nice so far

When will we see Luna?

is there horcrux in this story?

"Like a fake. Like Harry Potter was such a fake all along."
imposter syndrome
so annoyed this never gets to school and interacting with his new year-mates

Funny enough, I’m taking German 1 again in college (took 1 and German 2 honors in high school). I actually enjoy the language

like this story

"A cup of tee"? Lol.

...Starting to see where people get frustrated with the extensive scenery... Beautiful but also plotless.

what a load of shit

Hi there! Are you planning on continuing the story? I absolutely love it!

Amazing!

you're actually much older than your writing suggests. you tying to write from a young persons prospective. (being on the older side of the scale) has left you with a competent though young character ready for the lordship his next birthday will entail. :)

Too much detail.. it’s important I get it.. but in this case you’re offering to much and it’s slowing the progression of the plot and or story. Consider ways to include but at the same time keep the story moving at faster rate.

I cannot stress enough how wonderfully well written and thought out this fic is. It’s amazing. This is the second time that I’ve read it. I literally searched for it just because I wanted to read it again. Excellent work!

I swear I don't mind your story pace, but i can't help wondering if you will ever complete this fanfic with this pace? haha