Reviews for Alpha Queen
DracoKing30 chapter 8 . 1/21/2023
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
Tsukoblue chapter 8 . 11/2/2021
Why do you start such good and enjoyable stories only to abandon them?
cowchoas chapter 8 . 8/6/2021
more chapter pleases,
OniTenshi500 chapter 8 . 6/24/2021
When will you update this story?
Guest chapter 8 . 9/28/2019
Please update
saoyuuki12 chapter 8 . 6/11/2019
I would have liked this story better If you gave it qualities that the elfen lied plot line had. You did a great job but to me it seems like you weakened down her so much that she's like everyone else, she is friends with the Harry Potter before Hogwarts causing both plot lines all go all over the place! And y out tassed put ket factors in Lucy's backstory that made the story so great and interesting in the first place.
Your writing was really good, and if not some of the choices you made in the is story, this would have been a really good story. I really like how you just made Harry Potter this fricking immortal all powerful being. You actually made a different plot. I think you have the right idea and that other people should do it too.
FlameGilgameshLover chapter 8 . 2/15/2019
awesome more please!
BorderLand chapter 8 . 2/14/2019
The school is invaded by girls who could fight small armies and Albus doesn't even know it yet! Harry is a very lucky guy, with them on his side someone like Voldemort or the old goat are not even a challenge.
mad thought chapter 8 . 12/16/2018
This is an extremely good story, that I hope you one day continue. I would love to see where Harry and Lucy take their relationship in the future and how the other diclonius shape the story. Please update one day.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 8 . 10/14/2018
You made her a fairy. A fuckin fairy! Diclonious' are a type of fairy...I love it. I hope you continue this.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
YYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSS BITCH! Do the damn thang! XD
mokusoft chapter 8 . 8/25/2018
"Especially now that she had some of her people ready and more than willing to back up any counter attacks."
UNLEASH THE KAWAII ARMY
mokusoft chapter 7 . 8/25/2018
GOOD SHIT
mokusoft chapter 6 . 8/25/2018
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Basket in a Nutcase chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
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