Reviews for The Vampire Aoshi
icecreamapparition chapter 25 . 9/13/2010
I don't understand, what happened to Kaoru?

Well, I can assume my own ending, just wanted to type that out load. LOL

Anyway, I noticed two things in chapter 22,

1. Aoshi managed to drink blood from Misao with her amber necklace on.

2. Kenshin was supposed to be covered in blood/wounded and he's walking around the mall! XD

I guess, that's mainly the two things that I wanted to point out. Aside from that, I think the fic is good as it is. Well, it's not perfect, but I think it's really funny in every way possible and that it's meant to be that way. The serious scenes are good, too. It just made me a little stressed because I got used to the cheerful chapters. I also saw your profile and noticed that I've read some of your other fics as well. So far this is my favorite. (as if my flood of reviews aren't proof enough) I think the combination of comedy and fantasy (well, dark supernatural, that is) is your thing. I honestly love the bits and pieces of random things that you have inserted in this fic. I can go on and on about the parts that made me smile in awe and laugh hard, but I'll just end my long review by saying that the twisted scene of Soujiro and the rabbit is still epic!

So hindi ko alam kung bakit nagbobother pa ko na mag-inggles. Basta, kahit years ago na to, nalibang talaga ako, salamat! :)
icecreamapparition chapter 14 . 9/13/2010
I was about to comment on how you turned Kenshin from a slasher to a slave applicant (?) slash vampire cook, but then the scene with Soujiro was just epic.

A bloody twisted rabbit.

and it's furry red.


Wala na ko masabi! Kakaiba!
icecreamapparition chapter 10 . 9/12/2010
I vote for A! This is my third review, I feel like I'm flooding you! But seriously, the chapter was even funnier than the previous one! I LIEK IT! XD
icecreamapparition chapter 9 . 9/12/2010
Yes, you hate roaches. You can't just fill the room with dust and cobwebs, it HAD to be roaches, UCOs and UUOs! Hahahaha.

I wanted to put a helpful review here but I can't really think of anything to say except that I am really entertained by your fic. :)
icecreamapparition chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I swear, that was entertaining! The TV show, the ketchup... Oooooh *looks around* the black, sleek Ferrari! XD

I think you made a good start! I feel bad because I read the reviews first, so I have an idea that it starts with a tv show. I somehow forgot it though, and then I just started laughing when Misao started screaming. B)
jazzy chapter 25 . 1/10/2008
I luv u. It seems like kaoru is alive. i'm not sure. I'm an idiot, so i can't tell. But whatever. I'm gonna say she's alive... i've almost finished my homework. I luv this fic. I luv fanfiction. I luv aoshi with a burning passion...

Thank u 4 showing me what a good vampire fic looks like

jazzy chapter 24 . 1/10/2008
Ok- I admit- it's a cliffhanger. bye.
jazzy chapter 22 . 1/10/2008
IS MISAO COMING BACK 2 LIFE? Yay! I don't hate u! I'm sorry i wuz mean. I don't know what makes me think misao's coming back 2 life. i just do. maybe u'll make kaoru come back,too! I was crying when i said i hated u. believe me, my computer is wet... if it breaks, it's ur fault... *weak laugh* sorry again... bad jazzy!...
jazzy chapter 21 . 1/10/2008
jazzy chapter 19 . 1/10/2008
SAD! No more comments needed. I'll take when this ficcie-wiccie's all done (i mean when i've finished it) until then, my lips are sealed- hai-ya! take that you... oops, sorry... i wuz gettin' carried away w/ my special 'ninja review'... anyway, bye! :D
jazzy chapter 18 . 1/10/2008
Kaoru is dead! wa wa wa wa wa wa! Aoshi is exiled! wa wa wa wa wa wa! I am confused! wa wa wa wa wa wa! No more comments... i'll just make myself feel stupid... :D
jazzy chapter 17 . 1/10/2008
UG! THAT'S HORRIBLE! MY BELOVED FUUMA, THE ONE HOTTIE CHARACTER WHO WASN't TAKEN (WHO WUZ CLOSE 2 MY AGE)- AN EVIL SAD-MASACHIST WHO-KNOWS-WHAT-ELSE KILLER! Just kiddin about the hottie part... but i did luv fuuma... so darned cute! ickle-fuuma-kinsshiro? makes sense... yet confuses jazzy... arg! so sad.. wa wa wa wa wa wa! :( (the fic is still great... nice surprise, it gotta say- or maybe others saw it comin'... maybe i'm just gullible...) thanx! :D
jazzy chapter 16 . 1/10/2008
I'm not worried about 'all hell breaking loose'... but i am worried about aoshi and kenshin's challengers! Soujiro and Enishi... looks like they've got an eye for aoshi and kenshin's girls... tee hee hee... wonder what will happen... :D anyway, like this chappie... didn't get that misao wuz considering suicide until u practically spelled it out for me... shows that i'm too optimistic i guess... couldn't see the darkness in her! OH well... that's ok... still HW 2 b done...:(
jazzy chapter 14 . 1/10/2008
Well, i read this title 4 this chappie and i said 'a kissie-wishie- let me guess- aoshi/misao'... HA! I wuz right... at it again... phsycic powers, oH yEaH! peace out! anyway, it wuzn't that hard 2 guess who would be doin' the kissin'... poor Soujiro... i luv him 2, but he can't EVER measure up 2 aoshi... ah well... let's get this party started! :D
jazzy chapter 13 . 1/10/2008
here are the things on my mind-

1) h! Competition 4 aoshi (soujiro)

2) Nifleheim- a kind of non-majestic sniffly sort of name- it's OK though- sounds kinda german...

3) Lemonadegood

4) Green tea icecream good

5) is misao a vampire? U said something about her becoming a vampire because of that tea thingy... i'm confused! *tears leak down cheeks* oh well... u'll never respond 2 me anyway... poor me... wa wa wa wa wa! :D
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