This was a wonderful story, I got totally enthralled! It was beliebable, the characters in tune with how they should be, the storyline was convincing and without logic hole - and it was so sweet and romantic! In short, it had everything I could wish for. The only slight critique I have ( and it's light compared to everything that was right about this) is the deleading rating. With 'M', I did expect it to be a little more 'spicy'. As it is, you'd be perfectly fine rating it down. Well, maybe one day you'd like to go back to it and add an epilogue that that deserves the 'M' rating? I'd surely love to read it!

Honk, just blowing my nose and drying my eyes. What a great read and lovely ending. Thanks so much for writing.

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I really enjoyed reading this story. It was interesting and well-written. Thank you for sharing.

Okay I give up,ff clearly does not want me to review. 3rd try. Last ditch effort: Brilliant story, one of my favourites, stayed true to the characters and respected them. You're an amazing writer, keep writing more SS/HG and I'll keep reading it.

Freakin hell,I keep trying to review this story to tell you how awesome I think it is and my reviews just don't show up! Bloody hell. Keep writing SS/HG stories,I don't get to read many nice ones.

Oh dammit, my review didn't show up. Let me try again. This is a great story, I've waited a long time for the last chapter. It's well written, interesting, easy to understand and grammatically correct. They have stayed in character and I see that you respect these characters,I appreciate that. I love this pairing,I only read this pairing. One of the best stories I've read on them. Outstanding. You're a great writer, keep writing, especially about these two.

I can't tell you how long I've waited for this last chapter. I'm proud to say that other than the few times I've wanted to slap Hermione and then slap Severus, I've enjoyed the story as much as I did reading it the first time. It's one of the best SS/HG stories I've ever read and that's saying something. You deserve an outstanding. It's well written, grammatically correct, creative/interesting and easily understood. I believe them to be very much in character and I appreciate your respect of them. I'm not entirely sure that the end explanation is 100% as I really did believe he would have died after being away from her for so long (not that I wanted that...obviously) but I'll think on it a bit more. Great job well done, please write a few more SS/HG stories, I only read those. :-)

Wow, a remarkable story, so beautifully told. I loved the plot and the very interesting detail about the potions. I felt the characters were very in character and well, I JUST ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Thank you much, you have a LOT of talent. Soooooo gooooood!

I can't tell you how long I've waited for this last chapter. I'm proud to say that other than the few times I've wanted to slap Hermione and then slap Severus, I've enjoyed the story as much as I did reading it the first time. It's one of the best SS/HG stories I've ever read and that's saying something. You deserve an outstanding. It's well written, grammatically correct, creative/interesting and easily understood. I believe them to be very much in character and I appreciate your respect of them. I'm not entirely sure that the end explanation is 100% as I really did believe he would have died after being away from her for so long (not that I wanted that...obviously) but I'll think on it a bit more. Great job well done, please write a few more SS/HG stories,I only read those. :-)

When you described Hermione els leering quarter I wold have so love to be present. I would have told her to visit IKEA they have a solution for small (very small bedrooms )

Loved it :) sweet, lovely story

LOVED IT! _

I love how you developped and solidified magical canon. The background to Fiendfyre, Amortentia ... and in particular to Felix felicis. Like, things finally made sense, in the canon. Your explanations are very cool and I'm totally nerding here :).

It is incredibly rare to find a new story that can measure up with the best fics of the HG/SS Golden Era. You managed to write just that and I am incredibly happy that I could read your story.
I have an ambiguous attitude to dubcon - I get the thrill but actually acting on it leaves a bad taste and turns me against the character. So the balance you found with the apprenticeship and H doubting S' loyalties was perfect for me. Cheers.