|Reviews for Unbelievable|
| FinalFantasyDesires chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
This Story is one of my fave Trunks/Goten stories have read and I have read a lot! plz continue!
| crazy.yaoi.girl chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
omg... Q.Q *runs of and cries* :C
oh, and by the way: Instant fave :D
| melbulma79 chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
I just found this story. I love it. I know it's old but if you could go on I would love it.
| rintisku chapter 3 . 6/5/2008
so is this the end or are you going to have another chapter. do they make it okay does chichi ever come around to the idea of having a son who is gay and does she ever regert trying to kill her grandson. i really love this story, and would like to know what happened
| NiceNipps chapter 3 . 10/5/2007
You just can't leave the story hanging like that. It was so well done. I cried with Goten over the loss of his mom's support. PLEASE update.
| hi chapter 3 . 8/28/2005
ok, they are NOT GAY and how can a BOY get pregnet?
| Tamesha chapter 3 . 11/4/2004
i am shocked at chichi. how could she do such a thing? i cried when she wanted to kill her own grandson and when she disowned goten. how could she be so cold, so mean? if ur not finished writing this story. i would sure like to know what happens in the end. i hope they prove her wrong and she will learn the error of her ways. i'm so shocked that she would act that way. that was so, oh my god. i am so emotional right now. i'm glad i'm not around anyone right now to see me crying. it just hurt me, to hear chichi say those hurtful things and to hear her say she would still kill gotenks if she had the chance. how could she? she's the devil and doesn't deserve gotenks as a grandson or goten as a son. she just doesn't understand. good thing this is just a story.
| Carerra Os chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
No you stoped, will i like it so far hope you continue soon.
| Legolas19 chapter 3 . 7/30/2004
That's not it is it!
| Rezyra Sugamori chapter 3 . 5/27/2004
I've been watching for updates for this GREAT fic. WHAT HAPPENED? PLEEASE CONTINUE! I want that frigid b* to get her just desserts! How could she try and do that? I really love your fic and wish for you to continue. *big chibi eyes* PWEASE?
| Kitai Shinsei chapter 3 . 10/7/2003
You were flamed. Who dares? *Runs off after flamers armed with chibi-inou-Vegeta and an umbrella*.
I LOVE this story! You HAVE to continue. Just one -small- complaint...you should have focussed a bit more on Gotenks's birth. Where were Goten and Trunks at the time, who delivered him, what were their reactions, how did they feel? I just felt you rushed that part. Otherwise I'm LOVING this so far. *Starts polishing katana to go kill Chichi. Never liked that woman. Goku belongs with Vegeta anyway.
| Rockz chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
The story was good though it focased on trunks a bit more then goten, still i doubt i would ever be able to write something as good as that so yeah well done
| Mandi the Bunni chapter 3 . 4/9/2003
Please don't let that be all of it. If it is, you'll drive me mad then someone... may get hurt.
| Crazy Lady chapter 3 . 2/28/2003
Hey, this is a really great story. I know that I'm really late on review for this story, but I haven't really read DBZ fanfics in a long while. Anyway, this story is extremly well written and very well done. I do wonder when you'll update this story, unless you continued this story with another one, in which shows that I'm slow. ;; Anyway, this is a great story and I hope you'll continue with it. Also, I'm real sorry about the flamers, for it just shows that 1- they really don't have an opened mind, and 2- it shows how dumb they are for reading a story that had warnings for male pregency and male/male relationships. Another thing I would wish to point out is that, the way you wrote the story about male Sayians(sp?) have evolved to have children could be possible. The reason being is because very baby that is growing in the womb of the mother starts off as a little girl, you can say. they start growing the inside organs of a little girl, but after awhile hormons kick in and if the hormons are more towards a boy, then the baby with stop growing the female inside organs and start growing the male organs. Weird huh? Well, I just wanted to point that out so you could say, if you continue this story, that it can be possible from your story line for male sayians to have babies and rub the information into the flamers's faces. But that's just me, but anyway, please do continue with this story for I love it. This story is very wonderfully written and I'd love to see more of it sometime. Please continue.
| Johnnycakesdepp chapter 3 . 2/19/2003
That is the best story I've ever read on (save anything by Klara with Flares). That shit had me crying,my god, I loved that. I just can't stop saying that. But I really want to say that I enjoyed your story so much.