|Reviews for The fellowship of the ring|
| 1356-2478 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
A still beautiful poem, fierst fan-fic though it may be.
| Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 9/4/2003
It's pretty good. One thing, I think Boromir was hit by three arrows. Lurtz never got the fourth one off becuase Aragorn jumped him. It's not a bad poem though.
| Elise's Angelus chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
It's not bad! It's Good!
Capitalize people and place names (pot calling the kettle black here heh heh - and put speech marks in direct quotes. Don't neglect punctuation, just because it's a poem (hah more pot calling)
No time to grieve instead of grief, also I think (my opinion not fact!) that the last line could be "And thus begins the Fellowship of the Ring." - I know why you said end, because the film/chapter/book ends, but it's also the 1st part of a trilogy if you know what I mean.
One more thing that would make it REALLY stand out...is if you could make the poem ring shaped. It would make a great statement! Don't ask me how you would do it, but if you could it would be beautiful!
I like this poem! The more you read it, the more enjoyable it becomes!
If you do manage to get it ring shaped please let me know because I would dearly love to see it (obviously you are under no obligation to do it! pfft).
| crystalline chapter 1 . 11/4/2002
V. good for a first try!