Reviews for Bubble Gum and Broken Heels
jace4ever chapter 1 . 7/10
I have never liked Dumbledore. And so wondered why Minaver never stepped in between James and Severous. How did no adult teacher see what was happening. Same for Draco and the other Slytherins why did not anyone help them. Great story
Kat2006 chapter 1 . 7/5
I absolutely loved this fanfic. Could you make one where Alice recovers from the illness(?). Love you
MrsMorgan813 chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
and I'm crying. wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
Wow... Just... Wow!
Sheyla Snape chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
First ... sorry for bad English ... I'm not native to the language...
I'm speechless and there are few compliments to describe how much I enjoyed this fic. I'm almost asking you for an alternate universe where Alice survives, just to see a continue of this beautiful friendship. (please write).
You know, I just could not hold back the tears before I finished reading. I've been in the fandom for many years and I confess ... this fic is in my top 5 and I will certainly point it out to friends. Congratulations on the beautiful writing. I hope to read many more of yours. PS. Allow me another request? A fic with a friendship between Minerva and Severus as a continuation. Again, my congratulations.
Stunning Sunset chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
So sad! But it was nice
Saamon-sama chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
You're so terrible. This made me cry. T-T
sevslave1 chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
so many feels!
Katie Lady 8 chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
You are an excellent writer! The way you can use words to manipulate emotions is amazing.
thickety chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Who knew I could care so much about Alice Longbottom?

This is a truly amazing piece of fanfic, one of the few that I have actually cried while reading. Your writing has the quality of "in-handedness": something about the way your sentences and paragraphs are constructed makes me trust the writing completely - by the first break I was ready to follow you anywhere. Beautiful, and so in character. Love snarky young Snape!

It's pasta with bottled sauce for the family this week; I'll be in the study with the rest of your work!
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Man that was beautiful.

It had me crying like a baby in the end. Alice and Severus' friendship was very beautiful. I think it's the best I've read so far. And, Minerva, oh Minerva. I really loved this. :)
Marriage1988 chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
Such beautiful anguish. A heartbreaking work done well.
meg527 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
Fabulous. Thank you!
SweetJane72 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
I have never read a story which forced upon Alice Longbottom in such depth, and I am glad that this fic has shaped the way I will think of her character from now on. While this one-shot was heartbreaking, I loved the interactions between the characters, and the fact that Severus turned to Minerva at the end gave the story an air of hope.
Dentelle chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
Thank you for pointing us to this story, because: Wow, what an excellent, poignant story. I loved everything about it, just superb writing!
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