Reviews for Land Before Time: Journey Through the Mists Retold
antoniocrosthwaite73 chapter 8 . 4/29
Did I just see a Teenage Mutant Ninja turtles reference?
antoniocrosthwaite73 chapter 1 . 4/27
Did Ken have a time stone to?
websplorer chapter 18 . 2/1
Not bad, although the story seem to be a bit too focused on the humans, leaving the dinosaurs in the background at times.
Rock Raider chapter 18 . 11/2/2017
So, your take on "Journey Through The Mists", huh? Say, if Ken has a Time Stone, could there be more folks out there with them? Maybe we might find out in future fics. Then again, you're the author, I'm a reader. You do what you want with the story.

Well, anyway, see ya.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 18 . 2/1/2017
Whew, that was a close one with the bruise! Glad Derek could think up of something so quick. Glad to see the families approve, and really fun to see the at school conversations. Love the talk between Aylene and Ken talk too.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 17 . 1/31/2017
Love their promise to meet again! The see you later scene here is really nice, really different from the movie’s though I like that one too. Especially like Ali’s, Cera’s and Aylene’s final lines. Really interesting too with Littlefoot’s and Aylene’s final conversation. Delighted where Littlefoot sees his grandpa well again!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 16 . 1/30/2017
Love the idea of planting the flowers in the Great Valley! The romantic scene and its leadup were very nicely done as well. Great series you’re putting on!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 15 . 1/29/2017
Love your moment really giving Spike a chance to shine with taking out Ichy! Also really nice part going into Spike’s speaking. Nice angle too with Ichy going after Aylene’s eye in revenge, and love that you kept who saved Aylene in suspense for a bit, and then loved Petrie’s bravery in that moment!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 14 . 1/28/2017
Love the nighttime scene! Really sad and eerie flashback, and amazing how Ken and Aylene went through such similar situations. Makes Ichy and Dil so creepy here, being motivated by revenge!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 13 . 1/27/2017
Really excellent job with capturing the spirit of Ichy and Dil’s quarrelsome exchanges. Nice twist with adding the waterfall in there! I wonder what happened to Ichy and Dil here. Really love Ali’s response to the thanks here. Nice to see the romance too subtly making its way
AllegroGiocoso chapter 12 . 1/26/2017
Nice retelling, and neat cliffhanger!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 11 . 1/25/2017
Really like how you’re lengthening the story in places where it naturally can be, and Ken and Aylene’s interactions are really neat. Really anxious and exciting ending scene with the chapter!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 10 . 1/24/2017
Love Petrie’s reaction to Ichy’s lack of flight! Really interesting to see the connection between Sharptooth with Ichy and Dil. And really love Cera’s comments about bailing them out of trouble!
AllegroGiocoso chapter 9 . 1/23/2017
Gee, poor Cera being ignored! And interesting emphasizing that Littlefoot actually hears these bad guys talking about eating them for once. Really nice job at driving up the scene’s tension! Amusing that Ichy couldn’t tell Ken and Aylene apart considering he doesn’t even have bad eyesight, even Littlefoot and Ali for that matter. They sure are incompetent. Love Littlefoot’s heroism here, and love how they all helped in launching the final blow.
AllegroGiocoso chapter 8 . 1/22/2017
Interesting to see things through Ichy’s and Dil’s point of view and then Ken was apparently ersponsible for causing their maladies. Now wow, I did not expect Aylene to get knocked out! Great tense cliffhanger here.
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