|Reviews for Land Before Time: Journey Through the Mists Retold|
| Rock Raider chapter 18 . 11/2
So, your take on "Journey Through The Mists", huh? Say, if Ken has a Time Stone, could there be more folks out there with them? Maybe we might find out in future fics. Then again, you're the author, I'm a reader. You do what you want with the story.
Well, anyway, see ya.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 18 . 2/1
Whew, that was a close one with the bruise! Glad Derek could think up of something so quick. Glad to see the families approve, and really fun to see the at school conversations. Love the talk between Aylene and Ken talk too.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 17 . 1/31
Love their promise to meet again! The see you later scene here is really nice, really different from the movie’s though I like that one too. Especially like Ali’s, Cera’s and Aylene’s final lines. Really interesting too with Littlefoot’s and Aylene’s final conversation. Delighted where Littlefoot sees his grandpa well again!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 16 . 1/30
Love the idea of planting the flowers in the Great Valley! The romantic scene and its leadup were very nicely done as well. Great series you’re putting on!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 15 . 1/29
Love your moment really giving Spike a chance to shine with taking out Ichy! Also really nice part going into Spike’s speaking. Nice angle too with Ichy going after Aylene’s eye in revenge, and love that you kept who saved Aylene in suspense for a bit, and then loved Petrie’s bravery in that moment!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 14 . 1/28
Love the nighttime scene! Really sad and eerie flashback, and amazing how Ken and Aylene went through such similar situations. Makes Ichy and Dil so creepy here, being motivated by revenge!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 13 . 1/27
Really excellent job with capturing the spirit of Ichy and Dil’s quarrelsome exchanges. Nice twist with adding the waterfall in there! I wonder what happened to Ichy and Dil here. Really love Ali’s response to the thanks here. Nice to see the romance too subtly making its way
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 12 . 1/26
Nice retelling, and neat cliffhanger!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 11 . 1/25
Really like how you’re lengthening the story in places where it naturally can be, and Ken and Aylene’s interactions are really neat. Really anxious and exciting ending scene with the chapter!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 10 . 1/24
Love Petrie’s reaction to Ichy’s lack of flight! Really interesting to see the connection between Sharptooth with Ichy and Dil. And really love Cera’s comments about bailing them out of trouble!
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 9 . 1/23
Gee, poor Cera being ignored! And interesting emphasizing that Littlefoot actually hears these bad guys talking about eating them for once. Really nice job at driving up the scene’s tension! Amusing that Ichy couldn’t tell Ken and Aylene apart considering he doesn’t even have bad eyesight, even Littlefoot and Ali for that matter. They sure are incompetent. Love Littlefoot’s heroism here, and love how they all helped in launching the final blow.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 8 . 1/22
Interesting to see things through Ichy’s and Dil’s point of view and then Ken was apparently ersponsible for causing their maladies. Now wow, I did not expect Aylene to get knocked out! Great tense cliffhanger here.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 7 . 1/21
Interesting scene with Ali’s mother and Grandma Longneck – really heightens the tension of the scene! Like how Cera came along right away in the scene. Really vivid and creepy way of describing Archie’s arrival too. Really like how Archie explained how he acted was because of Ichy and Dil too.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 6 . 1/20
Neat time stone trick! Wonder what Ken and Ali are talking about? Like how the pairs split up, makes it more interesting to read. The sound wave science lesson comment was funny. Will be interested to see how these next scenes will be altered.
| AllegroGiocoso chapter 5 . 1/19
The reason for the separation is interesting! Really like that Aylene thought to write down a message... Too bad they can't read...