Reviews for Legend of Zokar
qjs833 chapter 30 . 4/12/2015
Hi sorry for not comment soon as I was oversea doing work.

Simply amazing, you have a true gift. . I Really like this story, the world-building you've done is really interesting and I love all the characters. :)

Watching Zokar find his way has been really neat-I'd love to read more and see what happens next! :D
qjs833 chapter 29 . 3/30/2015
Welcome back I miss you it been a while yeah I really don't like Masaru as he petifile, I hope that Zokar will kill him when his usefulness is done, For now he have no choose but to use him.

It was Nice that you continue Writing as I worry that you stop writing. Your story have Great premise.:D

I really enjoy your story, plot, and writing style. I really hope you continue with this story.

Thank again for your time and effect on writing this story :)
qjs833 chapter 28 . 3/3/2015
This fic is amazing and wonderful. You have a beautiful writing style.

Your story is addictive. This should be like a book. STORIES SURREAL.

You are awesome keep up the good work. Thank you again for putting time and effect on writing is awesome story and I hope that u update soon :D
qjs833 chapter 27 . 2/28/2015
Welcome back This was epic and awesome , I have ever read. It is incredibly long and complex with numerous different factions and characters.

It is amazing. These complexities make the story whole. I personally think that if it did not start out so intertwined to ATLA, this would be a book that I would happily buy. This is an impressive piece and I loved reading it.

keep up the good work and thank again for waiting it take care and god bless :)
WeissDragon88 chapter 27 . 2/22/2015
Yes! An update I Luvvv it! Please do another soon I check every day lol! I may be a little obsessed

Well done
shiro chapter 27 . 2/22/2015
awesome chapter, update soon
qjs833 chapter 26 . 2/5/2015
Wow I love it thank you very much for hear me out. :) Also I don't think what Akemi she doing is wrong as she need to protect her Fire Nation. Lucky Azula was there to guide her along the way Listen to Azula advice is good call but it will cause some problem in the long run.

I got a feeling that after the Civil war is over. There will be a Cold war between the Earth kingdom and the Fire nation just like USA as Fire Nation And Soviet Union as Earth Kingdom. I cannot wait to see how gun going to effect Avatar world in near future
Awesome They going to send the Order to Zokar It going to be EPIC. XD

Thank you very much for updating it, pleasure update soon.
qjs833 chapter 25 . 1/18/2015
Hi there sorry for the late replay wow I like how in your story you're incorporating the story from the last samurai with firearm it going to change warfare and the the world they live in, It a lot more than they did in the series, it was always such a mysterious thing it was so interesting to me. Now this going to be a new level of Zokar

I like how this story is going maybe Zokar send this mysterious weapon back to Azula about the weapon and warn her that bad thing going to happen and maybe learn or copy this weapon to use it against the enemy

overall I love it pleasure update it, also if can bit side story of zokar sister and azula talking about this new weapon that zokar have discover and feel trouble about it

pleasure update soon and god bless
qjs833 chapter 24 . 1/9/2015
great chapter,

Can't wait for your next update, reading this story has become one of my favorite story

update soon
babydragon11 chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
AWESOME! XD Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon!
Dragon age chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
SVEET! (SWEET) I'm already luv'n this story! Keep up the great work!
SamZ chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
A sequil? That's great! I look foreward to reading it!
Linhae chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
whe! XD i love it! continue!
Horselvr4evr123 chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
SWEET! XD Keep up the great work!
qjs833 chapter 23 . 12/27/2014
OMG ! The more I get to know of Haruko the more I fell in love with her. I hope to see more what her feeling toward zokar. Also I love how she to kick Anana ass hard, hope that Anana learn her learn not to mix with her. Who know maybe in near future Anana earn Haruko trust and become good friend. Or both of them fighting for Zokar feeling or love.

I love how u use dragon age 2 making into one of your epic story. Who know maybe we get the see more character join Zokar cause.

Keep up the good work and god bless I cannot get enough
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