Reviews for Legend of Zokar
qjs833 chapter 22 . 12/27/2014
Omg I love how Haruko look out for Zokar that so sweet, look she going to have a hard talk to our new friend queen of pirate.

This is epic I cannot get enough of it well done and merry Christmas
qjs833 chapter 21 . 12/20/2014
wow that was awesome I love it also I love the new character Anana. It becoming over like the RPG Game call Dragon age it becoming to be fucking EPIC I love it, pleasure write more as I cannot get enough. I think that Haruko will keep an eye on Anana as she don't trust her

keep up the good work and Have a Merry Christmas and HAPPY NEW YEARS
Joey chapter 19 . 12/9/2014
You r the best this story took me 2 days to finish but totally worth it write more stories like this pleassssssseeeeeee u rock dude
deadlyshadows chapter 20 . 12/9/2014
This story is amazing. Please don't stop writing it, PLEASE! I have been reading this for hours and hours; and You are going to rock it!
Read you later.
-DS-
Kyoto chapter 18 . 12/9/2014
I love this story! It's kinda like 'what would have been'. Once I started I couldn't stop, I stayed up until at least 3 in the morning reading about what could've been
midnightbitters chapter 20 . 12/9/2014
I'm so glad you updated! This was an awesome chapter and cannot wait for the next!

Update? :P
ArrayePL chapter 19 . 12/9/2014
*Awesome*. Just- awesome. Every chapter is better than the last! I can't wait to see where you're going with this story. _
Madman1 chapter 20 . 12/9/2014
Please update I love it and I cannot wait to see how you continue this story
qjs833 chapter 20 . 12/4/2014
OMG! OMG ! I love it thank you for hearing my feedback, I love the side story of Haruko so detail from point A to point B, Now I know how Haruko feel it not easy to kill your target. So much trouble just to kill one man but it was worth it.

Zokar will be very pleasure with her that her mission was complete. And I think he going to using her more often, hopefully one day we get to see more of her side mission or her thinking toward zokar. Maybe make a close bond together *3*

LOL poor her her first kiss is a drunker man I feel sorry for her poor girl maybe after the battle Zokar will give her a reward or maybe a kiss from him will be nice.;)
Also I think that Zokar she glad that Azula give him as a gift and he going to find her more useful in a long run.

thank again for another awesome story I really enjoy reading about Haruko I hope to see more of her in near future. well take care and god bless and pleasure update soon. ;)
dude chapter 18 . 11/30/2014
amazing fic. could hardly stop reading it. about to move on to your sequel! keep up the great writing
IvyVine6 chapter 19 . 11/30/2014
I simply love how you've written out this story. It's definitely a masterpiece;every one of its chapters.
Clevermoon chapter 19 . 11/30/2014
Oh man this is to good, it's like 4:00 AM and I just cant sleep because I want to read more.
I DON'T EVEN LIKE READING!
qjs833 chapter 19 . 11/28/2014
Assassin is like a double edge sword you love them or hate them, love by killing the enemy leader and save lot of live in the long run but hate them as they play dirty and killing in the shadow.

I looking forward of how Haruko going to kill Ryuu pleasure give us more detail about her side story as I want to know. We know nothing about her other then becoming a Assassin

overall great work and looking forward to your next update. Pleasure update soon
qjs833 chapter 18 . 11/23/2014
Ahhhh Azula Hero of the fire nation Death of above ! You're so talented its crazy, honestly i love you went in and explored the characters in this chapter, it was marvelous and breath-taking good

Lady Oriole look like she live another day, I hope that you have more line for Haruko as I like to know more of her, maybe one day Zokar can get to know more of his little ghost Haruko, ask question how she brought up and where she come from. Start a build a relationships if not a coat of arms will be nice

I understand why the commander are worry if I will with them of course I be worry give command to a Fifteen year old who have no idea how to command a whole feet unless he can get wisdom from his uncle Zokar in his dream how to command and hopefully guide him to become and better leader like his uncle

Anyway Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! Please update sooon :)
charizardag chapter 14 . 11/12/2014
loved this chapter hope you write more :D
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