|Reviews for Twisted|
| daughterofpercabeth417 chapter 30 . 7/6
Hiii! So I’ve read this fanfic once or twice now and this idea has kept going through my head: a one shot or extra chapter where Jace and Clary go back to Jace’s first foster family and he confronts/apologizes to them. I just think it’d be really emotional and a really big chapter for Jace. Just a thought!
| clacepercabeth4ever chapter 35 . 6/5
So I posted a review on the last chapter on the story already, so I'm gonna post this on this chapter instead-
Please update this story. It's so well-written and I would really like to see how it all turns out in the end. Please finish this story!
I absolutely loved the way you wrote Clary and Jon's relationship in this story, it's exactly how I imagine their relationship would have been if the circumstances in The Mortal Instruments were different and they were all mundanes. I've been trying to find a story where they have a relationship like they do in your story, but I can't! I really want to know what will happen after Jon wakes up!
(I know I have already written a review and I'm sorry for annoying you but I really really really really would like to see where this story goes)
| clacepercabeth4ever chapter 36 . 6/1
Hi! I wanted to say that I absolutely LOVED this story! I really really really hope that in the future you might finish it. I understand that it's been a long time since this story was last updated but I think it was really good and I really want to see how it ends out.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/13
So... she always cooks and cleans for the boys and let’s her brother give her orders and rules? Lol no wonder she was abused, abusers go for weak woman with no respect for themselves
| Samara896 chapter 36 . 5/6
Cannot wait for the next chapter
| SerephinaRaven chapter 8 . 4/20
this story is great!
| Buddy123 chapter 17 . 3/31
I did cry! good tho hope she's gonna wake up soon!
| Momkari28 chapter 36 . 1/31
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/14
If i had a boyfriend and he called me a whore, he would be missing a pretty important body part.
| Guest chapter 36 . 12/27/2018
| soph xxxxx chapter 11 . 11/2/2018
The whole story is amazing
| daughterofpercabeth417 chapter 36 . 10/24/2018
Oh my god oh my god oh my god! You’re story is absolutely AMAZING! It’s probably one of the best I’ve ever read on that site. You are so talented. Everything felt well-paced and everything that needed to be takes about was done-so tenfold. It had details and a great storyline. Nothing felt too rushed or not explained or dragged on. It was just great. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I can’t wait to read more! Also, I loved what you did with the different parts, it was really cool. It’s not something you see often.
| UPDATE chapter 36 . 10/10/2018
UPDATE ALREADY! I LOVED THIS FANFICTION SO MUCH! I WAS LAUGHING SO MUCH EVERY TIME I READ IT. THIS WAS SO AMAZING! ITS LIKE A BOOK I NEVER WANT TO END! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY! IT HAS HELPED ME THROUGH MANY HARD TIMES, AND I FIND MYSELF COMING AND REREADING THIS WHEN I AM HAVING A BAD DAY. THANK YOU SOO MUCH, AND PLEASE UPDATE!
| Someone chapter 17 . 10/6/2018
Are you Muslim or something? The way you describe girls here like they cook and wash her brother clothes and does everything her boyfriend and brother tells. Her father didn’t want her to drive (but let jon do it). Her brother didn’t allow her to date or wear certain clothes... look not only is it disgusting but also clary is white (and so is her family)
| vampirelady13 chapter 36 . 8/8/2018
Well ending it with No just walking up sucked. You could have done at least one more paragraph of Clary seeing Jon. Then you left a hole open about her parents and Jace.