Reviews for A Political Perspective
The Jingo chapter 12 . 2/1/2019
This is great.
LightningFuryStrike13 chapter 12 . 1/29/2019
This has been such a good story.
Keep me from my bed too. Great. Great job. You've handled the characters beautifully.
aviatori chapter 12 . 1/24/2019
So excited to see an update! Thanks so much for writing and sharing. It's such a treat to watch the team interact in mature ways, I find that to be so rare. I really enjoyed it, thanks!
TheChairIsAgainstTheWall chapter 12 . 1/23/2019
Sasuke is having a breakdown, right? No other interpretation of that last line.

I just found this, and I love it. Your Kakashi is amazingly well written, as is your Sasuke. Followed and fav'd, and hoping I won't have to wait too long.

Sharingan photo-ops are an amazing idea that more authors need to steal.
MangaMan250 chapter 11 . 1/21/2019
I absolutely adored this story from start to finish, its a bit of a slow burn in terms of progressing through canon but im more than okay with that. In a lot of cases Naruto is skipped over in order to get to Shippuden, its refreshing to see an amazing ground work presented before even many major events take place from the canon story.
Marksbay chapter 12 . 1/20/2019
Love it
The Green Blossom chapter 12 . 1/19/2019
Oh my god! You cannot believe how happy I am to see an update! I really love your writing style. Really love your humor. I often found myself laughing hysterically no matter how many time I reread this story. But yet it didn’t take away from the plot. Everything flows really nicely. Glad that you didn’t stop writing, and I’m hoping to see another great update soon. Can’t wait! xxxcheers!
Naru285 chapter 12 . 1/17/2019
well there went 4 hours of my life rather quickly. looking forward to what you got coming up here, very well done.
jukehero461 chapter 12 . 1/15/2019
This is, without doubt, one of the best Naruto fics I have read. It's canon-compliant as far as I can tell, heartwarming, funny, and has a smattering of original ideas, including Sharingan-photos of happy memories and the turtleneck-mask prank.

I cannot wait for more, and thank you for writing this!
rogueofstorms chapter 12 . 1/15/2019
fantastic chapter! Great handling of what are obviously difficult conversations for the characters, and I can't wait for the next update!
kaithelonechampion chapter 12 . 1/14/2019
I'm so happy to see an update (also, MOOD! I really need to update my own fics lol), and I wanna thank you for the references to what happened beforeit helped me remember the story without needing to reread it lol

You've got me excited to see what happens next, the one on one training! Among other thingsK
NorthernLights25 chapter 12 . 1/13/2019
What an update. Fantastic job!
Pom Rania chapter 12 . 1/13/2019
It's good that you have arrangements for your stuff if you die; I should probably work on getting it formalized with a friend or two.

What's your AO3, by the way? It's easier commenting on there, because of the whole "being able to leave multiple comments and have them responded to" and such.

Okay, I don't remember any of this stuff... time to reread the previous chapter.

*just reread the previous chapter* Ah, okay, yeah good, I remember what story this is now, and I like it. ...I have a lot of different AU fics that I follow okay, it's hard to keep them all straight.

I feel like you should have, in the first paragraph of the chapter, named who the "he" was; it took me a while to figure out who it might be.

Ah, being disguised as a drunken guard, THAT has some potential to it. (I've started running a D&D campaign, so I'm on the lookout for useful story points not just as a writer, but also as a DM.)

RECITING DIRTY CLASSIC POETRY WHILE STEALTHING. I can't think of any way that I could use that for my party, but it's hilarious and at the very least I'm keeping it in mind to drop as a reference for something that an NPC had done.

Let Naruto know that he can learn his father's name once he's proven he can be discreet with his mother's identity, now THAT is smart, and something I wish we saw in more fics.

It is Very Good that Sakura's parents are supportive. We need to see more of that in stories of all kinds, so people know that this is how things SHOULD be.

"Because you could kill me. Right?"
I love Kakashi's response to it though.

If this story's on AO3, then some time when I'm procrastinating something I have to do, I'll prolly go through and reread the whole thing and leave long comments on every chapter. I mean, it's been long enough since I've read this (aside from the previous chapter) that I only have a vague memory of what happens.

The whole scene about Kushina was really good.
Pierrot's Vault chapter 12 . 1/13/2019
I can't wait till you get them to the chuunin exams looking forward to the rest of your story
fringeperson chapter 12 . 1/13/2019
Thank you for writing this! I love it! There's feels. There's different perspectives. There's laughs. There's dramatic tension. There's depth and an exploration of possibilities. So wonderful. Thank you, again, for writing this. It's brilliant.
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