Reviews for Potter Trek
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 6 . 2/17
I've enjoyed this story, but your last update was May 2017. I've noticed you hadn't made any reference to what Dumbledore had been thinking about Harry's disappearance, and going a little berserk over it. I think Fawkes knows a little about where Harry is. Maybe, because phoenixes are actually from another world? Hedwig may be a owl/phoenix hybrid. I've also notice you didn't make any reference to wizarding information from any other place except Britain. Please, come back and help Harry find himself, and find a better future for himself.
Thank you.
Jimbocous chapter 6 . 12/23/2020
This is quite nice so far. Hope we get to see more of this in future. Thanks for a great read!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2020
Why does the Federation suddenly have AI? and why, even more bizzarly, does it have even more powerful VIs?
& why didn't the AI make even a token attempt at deleting the VI once it had computer access back, either time?

What happened to the original crew? I don't remember you mentioning that.

You forgot to mention the ship would have to drop its cloak in order to refuel.

Well, you've nerfed magic to the point I'm not really sure why you're making this a crossover with Harry Potter, if I'm being honest.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 6 . 3/17/2020
Interesting story, hope you are still working on this story.
Rawson Curtis chapter 6 . 3/23/2019
Hi, I have recently reread Potter Trek and I have really enjoyed it. I have really appreciated your writing style and your attention to details. I hope that you will be able to update it in the near future...
kb0 chapter 6 . 10/28/2018
This is an interesting story with some fun ideas. I find it unfortunate that you only work on it sparingly as it has some good potential. I appreciate the good writing, there aren't many mistakes. I hope you find time to work on it more often.

Thanks for sharing,
Kevin
darrelldeam chapter 6 . 6/10/2018
Wow, this is interesting, I noticed it's been over a year since it was updated, are you going to finish it?
enji-benjy chapter 6 . 5/10/2018
This is a well-written story, though I don't understand the reasons for all the subterfuge and dithering about Sky is insisting on when for the life of me I can't understand why he doesn't have his crew woken up or deal with the rouge VI in control of the ship.
enji-benjy chapter 2 . 5/10/2018
If the EMH has a mobile emitter, why doesn't the AI just turn the EMH on (which we have seen it can do) and tell the EMH it needs to revive the crew? The EMH shouldn't have any objection to that since it is a medical procedure, after all, in fact I'd go as far as to say the EMH's presents should be a requirement.
enji-benjy chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
What is the point of an AI that can be so easily defeated by a primitive VI and then, when it finally has computer access again, doesn't even attempt to purge the VI from the computer?
goblin81 chapter 6 . 3/12/2018
One of the best crossover stories i have ever come across. I hope to see you continue this piece again in the future.
PappyOldGuy chapter 6 . 2/12/2018
Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.
LightOtter chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
You have a few unfinished stories, such as this one and Xander Potter. Are they still WIPs or abandoned? I was very much enjoying them and I hope you do continue.
Left Head chapter 3 . 9/28/2017
"non-animal based milk"
You do know that's not actually milk, right? Harry asked for milk. He didn't ask for milk-substitute or a mixed beverage, he's not a vegetarian, so why did the replicator listed imitations and imitations mixed with taste additives? The only variation it should've listed is an animal type and fat percentage.
firelordeg chapter 6 . 6/1/2017
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows
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