Reviews for Without Pretense
starlite22 chapter 4 . 20h
I hope both Scarlett and the baby survive
VeronicaD13 chapter 4 . 6/10
Oh no! They were both so close to a change! Will the baby be saved? Will baby Butler #2 bring them closet together like we almost saw before their tempers ran away with them?

Can't wait for more!
Truckee Gal chapter 3 . 6/9
What a shame you didn't adapt this scene to be different from the book! Your description led me to believe that was your plan.
Truckee Gal chapter 2 . 6/9
Scarlett's got her marching orders, now it's Rhett's turn to apologize for absconding and taking Bonnie with him. Rhett, you tell her you missed her, take her in your arms and kiss her breathless. If she scolds when your lips part, kiss her again; repeat, as needed instead of arguing. Rhett's going to need a place to sleep tonight and it better not be Belle's!

Well, you've set the table, now we want to feast on you changing what happened in the book.
Truckee Gal chapter 1 . 6/9
Too bad Scarlett didn't have the presence of mind to redecorate her bedroom (making it less frilly), moved all his belongings into "their" bedroom and transformed Rhett's room into a nursery. That would get his attention! Curious to see where you're taking this after a very long hiatus.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/8
This is so sad. I can't wait for what you promised - some pride put aside and a better ending.
rhett's love chapter 4 . 6/7
Amazing, absolutely amazing. Bravo on another wonderful chapter. I felt awful watching Rhett go through this but at the same time he realized that he had to change. Can't wait for more
starlite22 chapter 3 . 4/17
I hope you continue this, and that she doesn’t loose the baby
Kat chapter 3 . 3/22/2017
Really hope your going to continue this, well written and its good to know Rhetts thoughts on returning home. Next chapter please!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/24/2017
You are truly an amazingly gifted writer...this was such a blessing to read. I was mesmerized with your writing style and how beautifully you executed Rhett and Scarletts inner thoughts and perceptions of their relationship. Very well done . it is definitely a tale worthy of continuing.
rhett's love chapter 3 . 1/31/2017
I really like this story. It goes by mostly what happened but then at the end of chapter three we see that she has seen his face as she is falling. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/24/2017
Next chapter please.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2014
Please update, I do really like this story!...
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
Great- please keep going this is a great beginning. Loving both perspectives.
rhett's love chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Please continue this. It's a great beginning.
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