Wish you would update! Fantastic story!

Wish you were back

WTF?!

Ugh lol it's annoying me cuz the part you wrote about Dom "she couldn't love him, but she could hurt him" totally sounds like a line from a song- but I CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT SONG. sorry bout the rant and I love the story ;)

OMG! I love this story! It is amazing. Hope to see some more. (;

this is really good! why haven't you finished it? i hope you decide to soon - i really want to know how this ends :) i hope kel and neal end up together :)

~Vampiremuggle

Vampiremuggle at gmail dot com

Could you update? I love your story. It's so awesome.

Sincerely,

-Kinara of Queenscove

You evil monster! How could be such a tourturer jk! It the freaking sister ever.

Cami of Queevscove, why are you such an amazing author? I have not stopped reading this except when I went to bed, even going as far as sending it as an email to myself and reading it on my phone during my off periods. D

Besides your incessant use of the word f***, this story and it's word choice was pretty awesome ) And I know that you haven't updated in what, 5 years? but I would love it if you finished this story, if you are able.

Always keep writing! D

Sincerely,

~WarriorKnight~

Woot! Kel/Neal lust! Sad ending, though. I love it! Definately added to my favs!

Do you not write anymore? How disappointing. This story was the fantabulous sexy, moody romp I needed. I was devastated to see that it was over and incomplete...no update in seven years? You could have posted an author's note ending it or with a summary of what was to happen :(

If you even get these reviews still, it would be nice if you could tell me where you had planned to take this story. My imagination fails me at the moment and I can't see a happy ending anywhere in sight.

Sincerely,

Kurisutiina-chan

update plz!

I personally wouldn't have ended it like that. But it is your story, and a darn good one at that.

Great job!

negh this was a bad way to end it because now i want more i want to see if kel will actually go through with it with dom or if she will stop or if neal will actually get married to yuki or if he will realize what a dim witted twit he is bing and go to kel ugh now i wont be able to rest till the next one comes out i do hope that it is soon i truly love this story and i hope to see the next one soon

watde9

so i have been reading the story and i wasnt going to review it till the end but i loved this chapter i laughed my ass off for hella days it was awesome the bet and how neal lost way to go a very orriganal thought i loved it

watde9