Reviews for Underneath the Surface
Angel Is A Centerfold chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Wish you were back
Jace chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Guest chapter 13 . 4/21/2013
Ugh lol it's annoying me cuz the part you wrote about Dom "she couldn't love him, but she could hurt him" totally sounds like a line from a song- but I CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHAT SONG. sorry bout the rant and I love the story ;)
Sarafine-Ecleips chapter 16 . 3/3/2013
OMG! I love this story! It is amazing. Hope to see some more. (;
vampiremuggle chapter 16 . 8/13/2011
this is really good! why haven't you finished it? i hope you decide to soon - i really want to know how this ends :) i hope kel and neal end up together :)


Vampiremuggle at gmail dot com
SoaringOnWings chapter 16 . 4/21/2011
Could you update? I love your story. It's so awesome.


-Kinara of Queenscove
ela chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
You evil monster! How could be such a tourturer jk! It the freaking sister ever.
WarriorKnight chapter 16 . 1/5/2011
Cami of Queevscove, why are you such an amazing author? I have not stopped reading this except when I went to bed, even going as far as sending it as an email to myself and reading it on my phone during my off periods. D

Besides your incessant use of the word f***, this story and it's word choice was pretty awesome ) And I know that you haven't updated in what, 5 years? but I would love it if you finished this story, if you are able.

Always keep writing! D


destined-to-be-loki-d chapter 16 . 12/27/2010
Woot! Kel/Neal lust! Sad ending, though. I love it! Definately added to my favs!
Kurisutiina-chan chapter 16 . 12/8/2010
Do you not write anymore? How disappointing. This story was the fantabulous sexy, moody romp I needed. I was devastated to see that it was over and update in seven years? You could have posted an author's note ending it or with a summary of what was to happen :(

If you even get these reviews still, it would be nice if you could tell me where you had planned to take this story. My imagination fails me at the moment and I can't see a happy ending anywhere in sight.


me me chapter 16 . 11/9/2010
update plz!
Neal is Mine chapter 16 . 10/29/2010
I personally wouldn't have ended it like that. But it is your story, and a darn good one at that.

Great job!
waterdemon9 chapter 16 . 10/25/2010
negh this was a bad way to end it because now i want more i want to see if kel will actually go through with it with dom or if she will stop or if neal will actually get married to yuki or if he will realize what a dim witted twit he is bing and go to kel ugh now i wont be able to rest till the next one comes out i do hope that it is soon i truly love this story and i hope to see the next one soon

waterdemon9 chapter 12 . 10/25/2010
so i have been reading the story and i wasnt going to review it till the end but i loved this chapter i laughed my ass off for hella days it was awesome the bet and how neal lost way to go a very orriganal thought i loved it

ThReE AqUiLa chapter 16 . 2/28/2010
great fic! i love it! all the drama keeps it fresh.

are you gonna continue it?
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