Reviews for Underneath the Surface
Fornax chapter 11 . 10/29/2004
Keladry/Neal and Yuki/Domitan? That sound good to you? Or anyone else for that matter?
Fornax chapter 10 . 10/29/2004
They're insane. TOTALLY INSANE!
Fornax chapter 9 . 10/29/2004
I-I-I'm lost for words.
Fornax chapter 8 . 10/29/2004
So much sexual frustration on both parts! _-

I likes!
Fornax chapter 7 . 10/29/2004
HeeHee! Funny! So Cute!
Fornax chapter 6 . 10/29/2004
You are SO like me! Except, our computer's in the kitchen...so I am an obsessive maniac who lives in the kitchen. Why Kel's fingernails?
Fornax chapter 5 . 10/29/2004
Oh yes, fun-fun.
Fornax chapter 4 . 10/29/2004
Damnit. iWhy'd it have to stop there? The dream, I mean.
Fornax chapter 3 . 10/29/2004
That was NOT a lusty dream. those are fantasies. a lusty dream involves them taking of their clothes and doing...THINGS. I have had TONS of lusty dreams, most of them about Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho. You'd have dreams like that too if you had as many pictures of him as I do. Is it possible to stalk an anime character? Sorry...I'm rambling.
Fornax chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
I LOVE Keladry/Neal stories. And Keladry/Domitan, too.
Fornax chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
That's...strange.
magicarnival chapter 14 . 10/16/2004
Okay, sorry, random critisizim, (ACK I CAN'T SPELL! XD)

I know that like, everyone does it, but come on? Do people really say fuck back then? O_o

I think some of the terms are way too modern. Since when did Corus have a strip club O_o? -is creeped out-
magicarnival chapter 16 . 10/16/2004
YAY! Always was a Kel/Dom fan anyway! But does Kel not really like him? V_V

Tisk, tisk, you did not fully capture the essence of Peachblossom! He would not bite if Kel said to, because he'd want to prove he listened to NO two-legger.

-sigh- No Jump... No Nari... Woe is me...
AdforCarus chapter 7 . 10/12/2004
i must say, i'm definitely loving this fic. it has me laughing so hard that my parents are begining to wonder what could possibly be so funny at 2:30 on saturday mornings. well, keep up the good work!
Aevum chapter 16 . 10/10/2004
A/N: *screams* NO! I AM SUCH A BITCH! WHY DID I DO THAT? GAH! EVIL EVIL EVIL CHAPTER! EVIL! DIE!

I CANNOT BLOODY AGREE MORE. HOW CAN YOU DO THAT? AH. FINISH THIS. PLEASE!
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