Reviews for Underneath the Surface
ThReE AqUiLa chapter 16 . 2/28/2010
great fic! i love it! all the drama keeps it fresh.

are you gonna continue it?
Terriah chapter 16 . 9/14/2009
:O

:O

No. NO NO NO NO!

hurry it along!

x
softporcupine chapter 16 . 8/4/2009
This is an awesome story and I am really disappointed that it was not finished. There are so few Kel/Neal stories out there that it is practically a crime to not finish an awesome story such as this. So, pretty, pretty, pretty please continue this story.
studentofwords chapter 16 . 5/31/2009
You left your fans hanging there for SIX YEARS! Are you completely and totally nuts? Us fans can do crazy things to an author who leaves us hanging for months, let alone YEARS! Please update!
studentofwords chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
Oh, the loveliness of awkward moments.
Heart in Spades chapter 16 . 5/4/2009
GAH!This is so amazing! I loved this fic, and am so incredibly depressed that it's over. In the (unlikely) event that you make a sequel, I shall pounce on it like a lion on a...zebra or something like that. Yeah. Get the picture? Okay. In short form, this is wonderful.
jayley chapter 16 . 4/14/2009
omg i can't believe that's the last chapter! since it has been about 6 years i doubt ill ever find out the end, but i guess that works cuz i cant see how this could possibly end very well or happily...
Lacrymose chapter 16 . 2/14/2009
wat the hell? that was a bloody evil place to end! evil!
Arucale chapter 16 . 2/3/2009
Oh gosh! I have always been a dom/kel fan but whoo this is intense. I feel so bad for dom that he is getting led around like that. Haha.

Update soon:D
MidnightsRose chapter 16 . 8/29/2008
what? you can't just leave this on a cliffy! tho you probly will never update, i'd just like to say this is an amazing story
blackdragonwingz chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
love kel! love YOU!
Lil' Miss All dat chapter 16 . 8/12/2008
EHMAGAWD!im dead cereal here u have to update like NOW! u must have a kagillion reviews by now iv been waiting forevur! JEEZ!

Luhv Ya Babe,

Beth
dark-angels-who-eat-cookies chapter 16 . 7/28/2008
Heylo. I don't even know if you write anymore. Probably not. It looks like it has been five years. Damn. Don't even know if you steal use the email address this links to. Double damn.

I love your writing, and I was wondering, if this story is never going to be finished, would you be able to let me know what you intended to happen? A pity that 16 chapters went by too fast.

Love Dawec
feathersofbronze chapter 15 . 7/13/2008
have I already told you to kill off Yuki? no? so do it!
feathersofbronze chapter 16 . 7/11/2008
I agree. you are evil
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