Reviews for Underneath the Surface
HORSEY GAL chapter 4 . 10/10/2003
PLEASE UPDATE - I AM BEGGING WITH MY LAST OUNCE OF DIGNITY
HORSEY GAL chapter 3 . 10/10/2003
STILL WAITING, NO UPDATING
HORSEYGAL chapter 2 . 10/10/2003
UPDATE OR I WILL KILL YOU, ...NAH ONLY KIDDING, WELL PARTLY...
HORSEYGAL2000 chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
PLEASE UPDATE - I HAVE BEEN AWAY IN SPAIN FOR TWO MONTHS AND I COME BACK AND THERE IS NO UPDATION :( BUT GREAT STORY!
MorThreeo chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
I hate to do this...but your not updating is ticking me off...

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sailorcheron chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
...

*glares angrily*

I would say something...but there are no words.

WHY NO UPDATES?

If you would be so kind as to examine the date on which your last chapter was posted, it is APRIL. Do you know what month it is now? OCTOBER.

THIS IS TERRIBLE. I think of a fic as a book, except a little slower to read, and yet more exciting, because the whole thing comes in incriments. Do you know what it's like to stop in the middle of a really good book, eagerly turn the page to the next chapter and find that NOTHING IS THERE

AH

You have so much talent! Why would you wait so long to add to such a great story? If you plan on discontinuing it, the least you can do is post some sort of note telling us so! Unless my eyes are mistaken, you have well over 700 reviews. All of these people must be sorely disappointed that you haven't written in such a long time. Please. This story is on my fave.'s list, and it is the only incomplete one that old. Hey, if you're too busy to keep writing, i'm cool with that. But if you make that decision, just let us know. I hope you decide to finish it, since it is the best kel/neal i have ever read. What i'm saying is, dont leave everyone hanging. It's not very nice

hopefully,

sailorcheron
pinky chapter 16 . 10/6/2003
hey i really love ur story!i really aint a kel fan but wateva-and yeah tis is wonderful!i m sure u wont let neal marry yuki plz dont & plz stop dom frm bedding kel!tis story maks me feel kel and neal r mad 4 each other so plz do somthin GET'EM 2GATHER!
Bree chapter 16 . 10/2/2003
This is an awesome story! Yes, this last chapter was angsty and depressing and not very funny, (besides the Cleon getting beat up thing) but it was really good!

I'm waiting *semi* patiently for the next chapter. . . .

~Bree
Kaliarnet chapter 16 . 9/29/2003
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT - sorry, this was going to be a lovely review about how much I loved it, (which is true... tres tres tres tres cool story) but I must speak - HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THEM! Gah! Ok - done now... Very cool, I don't normally get this emotional over a story.
lalala chapter 16 . 9/29/2003
I've given up on this story. Seriously. it makes me sad. it's been a LONG time!
claire of queenscove chapter 16 . 9/26/2003
oh my god. if you dont continue this (its been 5 months...) i will have to shoot you. in the foot. multiple times. i just finished reading the whole thing. stacey you are my freaking idol. AH *beats you over the head* now go finish!
Numair and Jon Lover chapter 16 . 9/25/2003
So good!Keep Writing!Sad Ending.:(
UR chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
That was great! No spelling mistake or crappy grammer, and I love neal. Can't wait to read the rest.
Ailehers chapter 16 . 9/24/2003
OMG!

you have to write more! you have to you have to you have to!

you can't just leave us HANGING like that!

cliffhangers are nice but you took it too far!

Neal and Kel have to have to have to make up!

you story will suck if they don't!

please o please o please

please make the do do birds happy!
Rogue Aisha chapter 16 . 9/22/2003
Aiie! Don't..strangle...evil...authoress...Gah! Come on! You can't leave me hanging! I GOTTA see Neal and Kel get together! PLeze UPDATE!
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