| Reviews for Underneath the Surface |
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   Fantushe chapter 16 . 6/17/2008 Is that it? Are you no longer updating? 'cause if you're not, I have to personally find you and knock some sense into that noggin o' yourn. That's a terrible ending! D: I can't believe I'm saying this (I'm a firm Kel/Dom believer), but I wanna see Kel and Neal get together! I promise you, I'll cry if they don't. T_T Keep up the good work! ~Fantushe |
| Fantushe chapter 7 . 6/17/2008 Well, I've been enjoying this story immensely, despite the fact that Kel/Dom is my preferred pairing. You're doing an excellent job, but there were two thing that were bugging me so badly, I had to remind you... Owen and Dom met when they followed Kel into Scanra in Lady Knight, and Cleon and Dom met during the grand progress in Squire (remember Cleon was grumbling about Kel and Dom riding so close to eachother?). Other than a few flaws like that though, this story is a gem, I love it. ~Fantushe |
| CheruChan chapter 16 . 4/6/2008 Wow ive just sat and the read the whole story! Please dont let the poor story be abandoned, I will die if i dont know what happens! DIE I TELL YOU! Lol sorry bit of a chocolate overlod! Anyhoo please come back to the story at some point cos its so good! Huggles! :) |
| cheggypu chapter 2 . 4/3/2008 This is very interesting so far, but the thing that really bothers me are the A/N in the middle of your story. Having to read them just disrupts the flow of the story and I wind up forgetting what I was reading about. Please save them for the end of the chapter. |
| invisible shakespear chapter 16 . 3/17/2008 ah! no! how could you just leave it at that? please please PLEASE update! this story is amazing! |
| Blackheart Feather chapter 16 . 1/17/2008 Please,please, please, please PLEASE tell me you won't leave it like that! kel needs to go to battle, get injured, then neal can come save her life and have a happily ever after! don't leave it there, not with *shivers* dom! AH! btw, i love this story, so if you can just add to the ending, i'll love you forever and ever! |
| Blackheart Feather chapter 3 . 1/17/2008 once again, you're awesome! love this so much! |
| Blackheart Feather chapter 2 . 1/17/2008 lots of P.S's... and yes, i agree. Kel/Neal is my favorite to. daine/numair is great too, that's tied for first on my list. |
| Blackheart Feather chapter 1 . 1/17/2008 WOOT WOOT! you rock, that was awesome! Now, on to the next chapter! Charge! |
| Fire-Metal-Horse17 chapter 16 . 1/6/2008 when you last looked, you had 510 reviews you should look now and see 1003 reviews! hurry up and update you inconsiderate moo! |
| Lady Knight Keladry chapter 16 . 1/6/2008 that was so angsty, it's a little scary. great story! it's just the self-hurt that gets to me. i don't mean self-hurt in the old-fashioned sense(physically), i mean the mental and the whole 'anything to get over him' thing. are you ever gonna update? at all? |
| 1001 chapter 5 . 9/22/2007 1001 |
| blackirises chapter 13 . 9/16/2007 YES! i'm review number 10! (i know...I'm easily amused, but you'd be amazed at what amuses you at 2:45 in the morning.) btw, i put this story in my kelneal C2, even if you never plan on finishing. truth be told, i don't think most of the stories in there will ever be finished. most of them had their last update at least a year ago, and some several. there don't seem to be enough of them though, and most of the few that do exist aren't very good, so I'm basically just searching for all the kelneal i can, and putting it all in there. maybe after I've found a bunch, i can start a C2 of GOOD kelneal stories. |
| blackirises chapter 14 . 9/16/2007 you know one of the things that makes you completely wonderful? you have LONG CHAPTERS! it took me FOREVER to read this story! i love that! |
| blackirises chapter 15 . 9/16/2007 aw! its so sweet and horribly sad at the same time. i don't know if i want to grin or cry...grin I suppose, since i almost never cry. |