| Reviews for Underneath the Surface |
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   blackirises chapter 16 . 9/16/2007 do you realize that you've gotten 486 reviews since you stopped writing this story? you know, i think that's plenty of reasons to pick it up again and finish it. -smiles hopefully- that is absolutely the BEST kelneal story i've ever read! and i spend hours on here SEARCHING for all the kelneal stories I can find. you're an masterful writer with an amazing story, and I'll love you forever if you update! -sigh- i know you probably wont. oh well. i suppose I'll just have to imagine my own ending...i think i'm going to check your profile now, and see if you maybe have more kelneal stories. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! IM JEALOUS OF YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING ABILITIES! and i'm considering writing another three reviews on this story on random chapters, just so I can be review number 10...hm...X) |
| AD chapter 16 . 7/13/2007 OK i luv this story! PLease tell me your going to update soon, I mean its been wat a few years since the last update. Anyway that doesn't mean you can forget about all us readers:( anyway i wanted to say i luv it and to please update, PLEASE! Finish the story, for us, but most of all for me:D Keep up the GREAT work! Update soon! Luv ya AD:) |
| Prince Utsuga chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 Ahh! I just read a paragraph and i love you already!Gosh, you are one of the authors that actually write stories that makes sense. Eek! I admire you! |
| Ilovenightmares chapter 16 . 6/18/2007 OMG!OMG!OMG! You author your evil, evil! How could you! * sobs so hard that I choke on the tears* I feel like you ripped my emo-sensitive heart out, and killed it a hundred dozen times! (I really am emo in the sence of being over sensitive toward things like this, pardon if I'm 'a bit' over dramatic) plz update soon! |
| Mouchi-Mou chapter 16 . 4/30/2007 keep on writing. i have you on my |
| Casi chapter 16 . 3/21/2007 I love it! So drama-licious, angsty, and perfect. Keep it up! More humor, though, if you can. I love the dialogue, and Neal's diary entries. |
| seekerchick06 chapter 16 . 3/4/2007 “Hm. I hear the black god’s realm is nice this time of year.” lol |
| seekerchick06 chapter 10 . 3/2/2007 hey i just noticed something. when you said kel was getting ready for bed you said she striped down to just her underthings and never said she changed yet at the end you said she was in the nightgown. Which is it? or did i just read it wrong. loves btw |
| Lady Mage chapter 16 . 3/1/2007 This was an amazing story, and it's added to my favorites list. I'd like to see you update soon! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/9/2007 just by the way. before you had cleon teasing kel about dom. now he doesnt know who he is. |
| wada chapter 16 . 12/25/2006 oh man ... its 2006 and im reading this.. GOD it was good. SO DAMN good! i culdn stop readin... ah ah...this comment is probly worthless but at least it'll add bolster ur numbers! perhaps one day this will b finished..? |
| wover30 chapter 16 . 11/4/2006 Damn! stupid stupoid stupid kel! No matter what I have got to say I've always loved these stories! keep up the great work! :oP |
| Scarletmage chapter 10 . 10/14/2006 its very late at night so i can't read the entire fic through any more... but very, very good. great flirting. great "lustiness". just wonderful |
| faia-soshite chapter 16 . 9/23/2006 Good chapter but, It's been 5 months 21 days, and 3 fuckin' years since you last updated. Come On! |
| Flax Golden Tales chapter 16 . 8/5/2006 Wow. You ALMOST converted me to Kel/Neal-ism. Almost. This is a really great story. Me lovish it. xD Please update. Now. |