| Reviews for Underneath the Surface |
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  NA chapter 5 . 11/23/2005 i like sexy story about my neal. teehee... Neal is mine. M...meathead...M...with only towel...M? #$%&*()_~! WTF! HEAD OUT OF GUTTER NOW! M...Meathead...anyways, really good job. |
| NA chapter 16 . 11/18/2005 SLUTTY HOE! WHY! DOM IS SUCH A C*! I HATE YOU, STACEY OF QUEENSCOVE! YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE HER WITH NEAL! (neal is actually mine, by the way.) WHY? SHE DOESNT EVEN LIKE DOM! SLUTTY HOE! I HATE DOM ** rips dom into squillions of pieces then boils him in vegetable oil them eats him with glee (with fries, that is.** DOM! IMMA KILL YOU! GR! SEXY MEATHEAD DESERVES KEL! WHORISH PERSON! DIE! |
| NA chapter 5 . 11/18/2005 MEATHEAD IS MINE SLUTTY HOE! really good work though keep going! |
| zkh chapter 16 . 11/17/2005 *Cries over Neal* Why evil Whore! WHY! i want neal to break up with yuki and get with kel DO IT NOW! |
| anomanamous chapter 2 . 11/17/2005 very good! but in one of the chapters you said "subconsious" Gainel gives them dreams, remember! (the god guy...DER!) |
 darkakane chapter 16 . 11/16/2005 NO! KEL AND DOM! AH KILL IT! HAVE SOMETHING RUN IN AND INTERUPT HIM! MAYBE NEAL RUN IN AND STOP IT ALL OR MAYBE YUKI COME IN AND PROFESS HER UNDYING LOVE FOR DOM? PLEASE YOU HAVE TO MAKE KEL AND NEAL A PROPPER COUPLE! |
| Anomynous chapter 6 . 11/15/2005 YAY are you sure the last part wasnt a lust dream? |
| Zoe pimm chapter 3 . 11/15/2005 GR Neal is mine, biatch! (sorry) its my neal, not kels but reading "lusty" Dreams is sorta fun ESPECIALLY with neal *DROL* |
| MaidenKnight chapter 16 . 11/15/2005 u r mean but make neal and kel be together they r so cute together |
| CrystallineX chapter 16 . 11/13/2005 Awesome story! |
| BEcca chapter 16 . 11/1/2005 this fic is amazing. if you are still around, please update. we're all dying- you can't leave us at this supense! and i know you haven't updated in a while- i doubt you'll even get this review. but please if you do. consider all us poor people who need to find out what happens. -becca |
| seawitch chapter 16 . 10/18/2005 what happened? why have you not updated this fic? it's so good! you can't just leave it like that! please, please update this! keep writing it! |
| BoOkZrOcKz chapter 16 . 10/15/2005 Don't tell me you finished this story already! How could you do this to me? You write really well, but it pains me to see Kel going off with Dom and trying to forget Neal. I'm a great Kel&Neal fan! Please get them together again! Please? |
| thy-stalker chapter 16 . 10/10/2005 are you ever gonna update this fic...i hope so because i really want to know what will happen after this...so please do update if you can...thank you...this is an awsome fic.. |
| burgundyandlace chapter 16 . 9/25/2005 This is an awesome story...oh, could I be added to your mailing update list please? My e-mail is Keep writing and update NOW! |