i hope you're happy. i'm reviewing this with the parentals yelling because you were so happy about it. and i liked it. ooooh, yes i did. those . . . what was it . . . "lusty" dreams absolutely made my day.

urgh. especially after seeing "the ring." that movie is the scariest freaking movie i've ever seen in my life. for everyone who's seen it . . . i just keep picturing samara crawling . . . gah! have freaked self out. must go put on loud music and focus on neal. and dom. and . . . mmmmmmm.

sooooooo. not too much to do today, just write a speech, get ready for a presentation, and a math test, and a religion test . . .can't ya just FEEL the sarcasm?

i must go. aforementioned speech about shark attacks draws me to microsoft word. hopefully i'll finish soon, that i may work slightly on my looooong story that remains unconcluded while everyone's tempers steam . . . i'm in a really weird mood, can yo utell?

~kate

Another wonderful chappie! I LOVE it. Clean/Kel friendship is good. Not more hate... *waves peace signs* :) My favorite part:

"Cleon?"

"Yes, Kel?"

"Do be quiet."

Cleon smirked and let out a small snort. "As you wish, Lady Kel."

"And don't call me Lady Kel."

"Yes, dame Keladry."

"Cleon, shut up."

"As you wish, my pearl."

"CLEON!"

Heehee! So good! I can't wait for more, so choppy choppy! :) J/K, take your time. I hope to see more soon!

*~ThE fLiCkeR fIrE fLy~*

interesting... hahah! dom! dom is cool. then again, anyone but cleon and lord wyldon is cool. although i might write one about him... and kel...just to freak everyone out...

theahri

Oh dear! SHe is going to be in big trouble.

OMG! U SOOOOOO ROX! I LOVE THE STORY! personally i would have preffered dom but hey, neals ok toooo! ;D:D i loveitiloveitiloveit! Please CONTINUE!

I'm FINALLY reviewing this. I AM so sorry I took so long. I LOVE THIS! Heh heh. Poor Kel. We never stop torturing her, do we? First its with finding herself in love with Joren (FI) and now its having "lusty" dreams about Neal. "I'll have you *screaming* my name by the time I'm done with you." Awwww! Perfect! I love Neal so much! Kel woke up at the wrong time, thought. She should have dreamt a little more.. *evil grin* And know what? Cleon's not so bad in this. Normally, I hate the guy, but I actually like him a bit in this fic because he keeps on bugging Kel. ... I do wonder what will happen when Kel is at Neal's wedding. I'm sure Neal loves Kel, but your fic (so far) hasn't made it clear whether he does or not yet. Of course, its only the third chapter. Where do you find all this time to write? I know you go to school- don't you sleep?

Eek! I still haven't done Spanish homework!

Love, ThePenMage

Interesting to say the least. I love this! Especially the dreams, LOL! Joren is definitely fun to write about as is Neal. And the dreams :laughs: are great, beautifully done...wondering where this will all lead to? Hmm, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

~Shivohn~

Yay, I read your story! Oh I hope Neal appears soon! It's good! Keep writing!

Yes, it means 'good.' Anyway, I would just liek to say that I would love to join Kel in stabbing Cleon with several thousand dull knives. It could be a party! *gets out streamers and party cake that has 'Kill Cleon' in pink loopy lettering* Wee!

I didn't really read 'cause I already did with the beta. But you changed the thank-yous. I was sorta exceptctin that. Laters.

I LOVE three-day weekends!_ Even if my teachers do sort of mess them up by giving me homework.

Great chapter! Kel is finally having some emotional turmoil, she's usually so... calm. Now, for once, she's confused! _

we want more! we want more!

Hello again! Thanks for yr email, i will mail u bk just... not now. I'm cross bcos i have to re-sit my biology test bcos i only got an A and not an A*! :( And i'm supposed to be putting the nx chappie of Moving On up but... i cant be bothered. I have to go throu and change all my mistakes and then... oh, I just ain't in the mood. Can i borrow Neal for a bit? He might cheer me up.

Ooh, i love yr fic! I'm gonna add it to my fav stories list! Kel having lusty dreams- that's just so... original! And its definitely not Kel but u write it like- oh, i dunno i cant explain myself! Its not the something u would see in one of the books but the way u've wrote it makes it seem... . Do you have any idea wot i'm going on about? i hope 's a compliment anyway. And Neal's just... Neal. Great- Neal's great.

Anyways, bye bye for now!

P.s. i like Joren too and i love Fallen Idols (thou i'm upset its finally over!). I'm gonna go and try to find this 'ICBW' ur going on about- it sounds good- Joren in a towel and sweatpants :)

P.P.S. I like Cleon's nickname- Cling-on! hehe!

You BETTER write the chapter soon...and that's no suggestion, that's an order! Hahaha!

Anyway, I love it so far! It's wonderful! I 'specially like the relationship between Kel and "Cling On", no, not a romantic one (Ewwwww...I never liked them together.), but the friendship one. It's good! Write more!

KEEP YOUR MIND IN THE GUTTER! You wouldn't be you if it wasn't there! But seriously, Joren in ICBW... isn't he just gorgeously mmmm? Can't think of the right words there. Now normally I'm not the biggest Joren fan, but ICBW just totally changed my mind. ::sighs:: Oh, and Sulia was 14 when she started writing it. That's only slightly worrying!

Well, off Joren and on to the chapter. Which was very good. I'm really worried about what's going to happen when she meets Neal at his wedding. Knowing you, it won't be good news for Yuki. I've already told you what I think of this in my email, but I'm just going to say this again: STOP PUTTING YOURSELF DOWN! How many nice reviews is it going to take for you to realise that we like your writing? I'm not just saying that cos I'm Jude, and cos you're Stacey. Tis the truth.

So there. I have spoken!

Wow, you're being very...uh...prolific (gotta love that word. Sort of). Chapter three already. You're making me feel guilty! When'll I ever get round to writing my next chapter?

OK, enough. I still haven't played my flute, and I need to go and... think about Joren! Or do my Spanish homework. Nah, I prefer the Joren idea...

Luv ya Stacey!

~Judeeee