Reviews for Underneath the Surface
Cobweb2 chapter 3 . 11/11/2002
Cami...WOW! You said this was good and I thought; "Okay, I'll check it out" Now I'm sitting here, gasping and wondering how a FANFIC can have THAT effect on me! Cami, I LOVE YOU (or your writing style at least)

I'll send you a mail about that co-writing thing, I'm sure it'll get SO much better after you join my fight for a good ending:)
MEE chapter 3 . 11/11/2002
NEEEEEEDDDD! !

NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Lady Marie chapter 3 . 11/11/2002
Please update this is a great story!
veralidaine3 chapter 3 . 11/10/2002
i love it. i love neal. update soon.
Jossie chapter 3 . 11/10/2002
I love how you upload the next chapters up so fast! And I am so happy you decided to write this :) I've finished my last exam! YAY! So I've got basically... 4 months of nothing! No schoolwork, no SACs, no nothing! I'll be writing my fics, reading, cleaning up those magazines... writing, reading again! :) :) I'm so happy!
Keita chapter 3 . 11/10/2002
I know! The Cleon and Kel argurment are so cute and FUNNY! I grin when I read them! oOo! So smutty! Screaming his name? *wicked grin* I like! Mucho! Beaucoup! Viel! Molto! Muito! Mycket!

p.s. That was "much" in like 6 different languages... Heheheh!

:oD
The Blind Assassin chapter 3 . 11/10/2002
That was so funny! Cling On. hehe. I LOVE CLEON in this fic. That not fair. I mean, i don't love him, i mean, i DISLIKE him as I always do, but he's so cute! *sigh* You're so evil. Now i'm actually LIKING CLEON for once. All those fantasies with Neal are so... ARGH, frustrating, but perfect.

*sigh* Min of Stone Mountain? Ugh, I WISH! If only i were that lucky! I am unhealthily obsessed, i suppose. Heck, he's worth it, though. You know, I want Eminem too... Min Mathers. Hmmmm, I like that too. Only I think Joren is hotter, even if he isn't real. Eck, but i dunno, i mean, in 8 mile he was SO hot...

I'm pathetic.

Nice chapter.

-Min
Snowflake chapter 2 . 11/9/2002
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Yay! An update- don't know how you do it so quickly and make it so *good*! And I'm not just saying that cos you're my friend (what makes you think we're friends anyway? Huh? LOL! Course we are.), I really do think you're a wonderful author. Would I lie to you?

K, enough PROCRASTINATION, and onto the real purpose of this: to discuss caffeine. Uh, no, that's not right, is it? To discuss your story.

It was a good chapter- the dream was SO sweet (and slightly smutty- duh!). And you know what- Cleon was very funny... he kinda reminded me of himself in ICBW, y'know...

C: Are we there yet?

K: No.

C: Are we there yet?

K: No

C: Are we there...now?

I love that story so much! But really, your Cleon reminded me of that so much- which is a VERY good thing.

K, have to go now... email me! Oh, and don't worry bout not sending this to me first, I probably couldn't have read it in time. Damn training. But...enough of that. I'll be able to read your other chappies, hopefully.

Your psychopathic friend...

~Judeeeeeeee
xMoonDropx chapter 2 . 11/8/2002
Meathead... *sighs*... he is sooo mine. Oh god, that was really good. I hope you post more soon. Laters.
Jishoshojo chapter 2 . 11/8/2002
Coolcoolcool! The dreams are very intriguing, I wonder if the fact that they're always in a field of wildflowers is of any importance?

The little back-and-forth parts between Kel and Cleon are funny. _ By the way, do you think I'm addicted to smiley faces? I put them in like every review or e-mail I write. _; Argh! Another one!
Arctic Princess chapter 2 . 11/8/2002
Yay! i'm looking forward to more, please update rebound also, I really like it!
Merrybeans chapter 2 . 11/8/2002
Hey! i love this! aaah! Neal and Kel are so sweet together and yr fic is good cos it just anit one of those sudden

Neal: 'Kel i love u!'

Kel: 'Neal i love u 2! and now Cleon's married that other girl we can get married 2!'

uh- those drive me mad- but i like yours. Yours has... wot's the word? i dunno. Style. hehe. I like her dreams especially. i want dreams like that! D'ya know of a way i can programme my dreams?

Anyways, great story, write more!

P.S. D'ya think i ought to change my name to Merry of Masbolle? I can't decide.
Treesamphetamine chapter 2 . 11/8/2002
That was kinda scary, but in a good way, ya know? Anywho, i just wanted to say...WOOOOWAAAAAAAAAAHH! Bye now.
Alex OF QUEENSCOVE chapter 2 . 11/7/2002
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

K/N smuttiness!

Cleon must die! *sulks*
KATEEEEEEEEEEE chapter 2 . 11/7/2002
er . . . YAY! loverlyness.

i must go. people are yelling. maybe there's a fire. *looks around in confusion* fire? fire? ah. fire. must go.

mmm . . . travis makes quite a nice sofa warmer . . . and christopher ralph makes quite a nice bed warmer . . . yumyum.

bye now! write more!
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