Reviews for Underneath the Surface |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cami...WOW! You said this was good and I thought; "Okay, I'll check it out" Now I'm sitting here, gasping and wondering how a FANFIC can have THAT effect on me! Cami, I LOVE YOU (or your writing style at least) I'll send you a mail about that co-writing thing, I'm sure it'll get SO much better after you join my fight for a good ending:) |
![]() ![]() NEEEEEEDDDD! ! NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this is a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it. i love neal. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you upload the next chapters up so fast! And I am so happy you decided to write this :) I've finished my last exam! YAY! So I've got basically... 4 months of nothing! No schoolwork, no SACs, no nothing! I'll be writing my fics, reading, cleaning up those magazines... writing, reading again! :) :) I'm so happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know! The Cleon and Kel argurment are so cute and FUNNY! I grin when I read them! oOo! So smutty! Screaming his name? *wicked grin* I like! Mucho! Beaucoup! Viel! Molto! Muito! Mycket! p.s. That was "much" in like 6 different languages... Heheheh! :oD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so funny! Cling On. hehe. I LOVE CLEON in this fic. That not fair. I mean, i don't love him, i mean, i DISLIKE him as I always do, but he's so cute! *sigh* You're so evil. Now i'm actually LIKING CLEON for once. All those fantasies with Neal are so... ARGH, frustrating, but perfect. *sigh* Min of Stone Mountain? Ugh, I WISH! If only i were that lucky! I am unhealthily obsessed, i suppose. Heck, he's worth it, though. You know, I want Eminem too... Min Mathers. Hmmmm, I like that too. Only I think Joren is hotter, even if he isn't real. Eck, but i dunno, i mean, in 8 mile he was SO hot... I'm pathetic. Nice chapter. -Min |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! Yay! An update- don't know how you do it so quickly and make it so *good*! And I'm not just saying that cos you're my friend (what makes you think we're friends anyway? Huh? LOL! Course we are.), I really do think you're a wonderful author. Would I lie to you? K, enough PROCRASTINATION, and onto the real purpose of this: to discuss caffeine. Uh, no, that's not right, is it? To discuss your story. It was a good chapter- the dream was SO sweet (and slightly smutty- duh!). And you know what- Cleon was very funny... he kinda reminded me of himself in ICBW, y'know... C: Are we there yet? K: No. C: Are we there yet? K: No C: Are we there...now? I love that story so much! But really, your Cleon reminded me of that so much- which is a VERY good thing. K, have to go now... email me! Oh, and don't worry bout not sending this to me first, I probably couldn't have read it in time. Damn training. But...enough of that. I'll be able to read your other chappies, hopefully. Your psychopathic friend... ~Judeeeeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meathead... *sighs*... he is sooo mine. Oh god, that was really good. I hope you post more soon. Laters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coolcoolcool! The dreams are very intriguing, I wonder if the fact that they're always in a field of wildflowers is of any importance? The little back-and-forth parts between Kel and Cleon are funny. _ By the way, do you think I'm addicted to smiley faces? I put them in like every review or e-mail I write. _; Argh! Another one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! i'm looking forward to more, please update rebound also, I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! i love this! aaah! Neal and Kel are so sweet together and yr fic is good cos it just anit one of those sudden Neal: 'Kel i love u!' Kel: 'Neal i love u 2! and now Cleon's married that other girl we can get married 2!' uh- those drive me mad- but i like yours. Yours has... wot's the word? i dunno. Style. hehe. I like her dreams especially. i want dreams like that! D'ya know of a way i can programme my dreams? Anyways, great story, write more! P.S. D'ya think i ought to change my name to Merry of Masbolle? I can't decide. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was kinda scary, but in a good way, ya know? Anywho, i just wanted to say...WOOOOWAAAAAAAAAAHH! Bye now. |
![]() ![]() mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm K/N smuttiness! Cleon must die! *sulks* |
![]() ![]() er . . . YAY! loverlyness. i must go. people are yelling. maybe there's a fire. *looks around in confusion* fire? fire? ah. fire. must go. mmm . . . travis makes quite a nice sofa warmer . . . and christopher ralph makes quite a nice bed warmer . . . yumyum. bye now! write more! |