| Reviews for Underneath the Surface |
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   The Sin they called Pride chapter 16 . 6/5/2005 OMG EVILNESS! lol please update soon! Omg Im in suspense..._ |
| Captain Cheese chapter 16 . 6/5/2005 IS that the end! It cant be, pleae do another chapter or something, theyre ment to be together...I cant bare it like this! |
| Some Random Reviewer chapter 4 . 6/5/2005 Gah! ARRGHH! you are so mean to your characters! though i cant say i blame you, kel does deserve punishing. as leah says, I HATE KEL! I HATE KEL! etc etc etc lol. sugar. :) |
| KelNeal Lover chapter 12 . 6/5/2005 this chapt is great! i nearly died of laughter when NEAL stripped! |
| Arein chapter 16 . 5/18/2005 ARE YOU INSANE? WHAT THE HECK! HOW CAN YOU BE SO EVIL? Okay so up to about this point I have really liked this story BUT WHAT ARE YOU SMOKING? SO EVIL. THEY HAD BETTER GET BACK TOGETHER OR I'LL...I'll...well I don't know exactly what I'll do but...er...YOU WON'T LIKE IT. Sorry about the whole rant thing but I just love Kel and Neal pairings and well when they are not happily together or are supposed to get married to other people even though they would much rather be with each other I just kind of lose it. So Sorry. I really do love your story. Any whoo please update soon. |
| Jeva Poe chapter 16 . 5/13/2005 AGH! *&$%# #)%! Write more write more! *dies of agony* |
| horsebuddy1888 chapter 16 . 5/8/2005 Awesome. Please update again soon! |
| Lynds chapter 16 . 5/4/2005 I love this story! I have this obssesion with sexual tension between best friends and stuff! I hope you add soon! Could you let me know when you do put up another chapter? Lynds |
| tiffany chapter 11 . 4/16/2005 omigod! you desperately need to update! You are such a good writer, why did you just stop? did it get too hard? i thought the point of this site was to show your work and get reviewed, but how can you ever learn from your reviews if you never read them? |
| jessalae chapter 1 . 4/11/2005 two years. two %$#*&&! years. More than that, actually. so why don't you UPDATE? Please? Pretty please? |
| Enchanter's Nightshade chapter 16 . 3/16/2005 j'ai pensé que c’était très intéressant. continuez – vite! ~* Lady Sapphira *~ |
| frizzy chapter 14 . 3/13/2005 great story but back then they wore long dresses it was improper to show your legs bare it was reserved for the bedroom if u get my point Chow and keep up the great work |
| sapjira chapter 16 . 3/11/2005 you are never going to update, are you? *is depressed* It's very good, I wish you would. |
| StarGazer89 chapter 12 . 3/9/2005 didn't she put her key in her dress? wouldn't roaul have to go in and get it? just curious. |
| jaanniiii chapter 16 . 3/4/2005 OMG! please PLEASE, i am BEGGING you, UPDATE! omg...this story is so good! WHY o why isn't kel with neal already...man o man...what's gopgi mnto happen? i love this story! cheers |