|Reviews for Narnia in 28 Lines|
| Mulberries chapter 1 . 10/28/2017
I love it, good job.
| Authourinthemaking chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
I absolutely love this! :) Well done on capturing the highlights of each book.
| PhiL0Sophie chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
AAWWW I LOVE THIS THIS IS SO CUTE NARNIA IS THE FLIPPING BEST
| EttaEx chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
I think this is a lovely poem. I believe you captured each book beautifully with only having 4 lines per book. It really shows knowledge and understanding of each book. But also without giving any spoilers to someone who may not have read them all
| Gryffindor01 chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
This is really good. I just wrote my own, first fanfic, for Narnia, and really, basically you summed up what I used like three pages for, in one las tline;
Now in his country;no regrets!
That was really beautiful! I love it!
| Cowboy-4-Christ chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
That was cool
| Hawk chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
| AslanDaughter chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
You summed up the entire Chronicles of Narnia in a seven stanza poem. And the line at the end, now in His country, no regrets, sums up what heaven will be like, when we get there, we will have no regrets. May the peace of God which passes all understanding guard your heart and mind forever more, go in peace, serve the Lord.
| pistonsfan75 chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Nice! I like it.
| Narnia-Bound1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Wow. Well done!
| Pip the Dark Lord of All chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Great little poem!
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Good description of Narnia in poetry form.
| Hephzi - Ruler of the world chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
:') Beautiful! :3
| Tohdoh chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
| Violets and Lilies chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Lovely! It makes me smile and a little teary and then smile again. Just like the books do.