|Reviews for The Road to Paradise|
| SamPristine chapter 7 . 5/2
God! I hadn't read this last chapter! It's so good! I loved how you used the magpie to link Yami's and Seto's experiences. Holy cow! This deserves so much more love!
| polyvolchant chapter 7 . 4/11
This! This is an incredible work! I can't help myself but sign up for a fanfiction account so that I can leave a compliment for you two! The plot is deep and it is by all means being wonderfully revealed bit by bit, I enjoy this pace a lot. And the characters, even those who are outside the main cast have their charms. How do you two even manage to create something so wonderful?
I love the way you write Atem and Kaiba, especially in the moments when their past live bleeds into their present. These moments carry the pathos of an old world unremembered, and yet the two's reunion in the present defies the decimation by time. I know it is tremendous amount of label, but please, keep going!
| Hirami chapter 7 . 2/11
(Hirami here, reviewing as Anon because FFnet only allows 1 comment grrrr)
*slams door open and storms back in*
Here I am againnnn rereading this because I love it soooooo much q.q Seriously, this fanfiction is a masterpiece and I can't thank you enough for writing it. The amount of sexual tension between Kaiba and Yami is too damn high, and it thrills me every time again when they fall head over heels into their next fiasco.
And the back story is so goddamn thrilling, I love love love the dark aspects of it. The flashback, Kaiba starting to question his own sanity...
Just perfect. Just the right amount of perfect.
I think this is also one of the few stories around that has Yami still in Yugi's body, which makes for an interesting twist (and one I can't wait to see getting untangled, hnn).
I don't know if you're still around and working on this... but if you decide to abandon it, I would love to know what way you had in mind for this... what was supposed to happen, how does the story end, what was threatening our beloved duelling dorks...
Ahn, another random thought, I like the chapter names. It's something simple, but they always fit so well~
Anyway. Until the next reread *waves and sends over tons of love*
| jjisme chapter 7 . 1/9
please continue! I really like Yami's and Kaiba's one step forward-two steps back dynamic here! The uncertainty (loved Kaiba's mini panic attack at the roof) or the heated encounters that escalate quickly... Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Shaded Vision chapter 7 . 11/7/2017
This fic is super interesting! Second time reading it and I really hope you continue it!
| icygolden.palace chapter 7 . 7/17/2017
This is such an interesting and enjoyable story. I really love your other stories as well and hope that you will continue this soon. Please!
| Wolf'sVine chapter 7 . 6/17/2017
So, Yami and Kaiba are always dancing around each other... whether they want to or not. I honestly feel a bit bad for that Irika girl. It's weird, though, Yugi being angry at Yami... and I don't really understand why he is when Yami's struggling with his own feelings for Kaiba and their constant challenging of the other. And it doesn't help that Yami doesn't have a body of his own and is using Yugi's... though it's obvious he isn't doing so on purpose, but that he and Kaiba are getting too caught up in each other. I hope they have a little tete-a-tete and just... come to some sort of understanding. I wonder if Yugi's gonna talk to Yami at any time? I hope they don't pout at each other cuz... it's a depressing thought. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and I hope it'll be really soon. Please?
| XXXHells Angel of deathXXX chapter 7 . 3/27/2017
Someone on Tumblr recommend this and I am so glad they did. It's very easy to differentiate between Yami and Yugi no one is acting occ and the plot is so interesting I can't wait to see more .
| Hirami chapter 3 . 3/25/2017
review for chapter 4 because ffnet only allows one review Dx
Okay. OKAY. So I'm rereading this masterpiece (I still love it as much as at the first time reading... and the second time reading)... and this chapter is honestly so damn amazing. Mokuba playing Kaiba and Yami so they go on this hilarious rollercoaster together... them sitting... well, the way they sit in there :D and Yami, of all people, getting scared and distressed, pressing up to Kaiba. THIS IS AMAZING.
And I think I gushed about THE scene already, but I'd do it anytime again. I LOVE THEM MAKING OUT in that small space... goddamn. This is so good ;_; I'd like to forever thank you for this. Because this is one of my most favorite Prideshipping scenes in all the glorious Prideshipping FanFics out there. Thank you so much for writing this 3
| Hirami chapter 7 . 3/16/2017
I'm so happy you're back! This was the best news *_* I'm glad the movie managed to pull you back in, hehehe *giggles*
I have to reread the whole story soon because I don't remember the details (my brain sucks argh), but even without it, this was still amazing to read. I really really love your idea with the magpie. Kaiba's thoughts straying over to Yami while daydreaming is just awesome. And then the scene with him noticing the scratches... but Kaiba pulling Yami with him was the best thing. God damn it those two just belong together. Loved that scene! Especially Kaiba sitting on the table, heheheh. Can't risk your long wobbly legs giving out under you ehh.
But yeah. There are no classroom scenes without getting interrupted :'D god damn it.
Thank you again for writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter ️️️
| andchipzz chapter 7 . 3/16/2017
i will stick with you! sooo curious where this is going
| anySuzuki chapter 7 . 3/13/2017
i just recently found your fic and it was great! i thougth i das late for new updates but you made my day! really... Yugi it's getting somber... poor Yami it's conflicted and that girl it's making all worse!
Is he going to stay mad with Yami too long? 'cause he is the only way Yami can breath fresh air... out of his confinement? poor poor Yami... he's going to became crazy if this keep going.
i don't like that irika girl!
god, thanks for writting! see ya!
| Howl3 chapter 7 . 3/13/2017
Not surprised how that situation ended up, though I did end up feeling quite annoyed at Yugi. Feeling sorry for Irika, fine, but none of that is Yami's fault nor do I think it his responsibility to go up to a girl he doesn't know or has never spoken to and talk about his personal feelings or his relationship to Seto which he doesn't even have an answer to anyway. It's certainly not Yami's fault that Yugi is so nice that he got involved and encouraged the girl even trying to drag Yami into it. I just feel that Yami has enough problems dealing with Seto to deal with extra stuff that honestly has nothing to do with him, which sounds cruel, but that's just how I look at it. Other than that, loved the chapter, felt as annoyed with that woman as Seto did for automatically assuming that they would be competing in the tournament, though tournaments and weird stuff happening is canon, and very curious about the dream and reality thing going on. Can't wait for those two to get out of relationship limbo.
| Please update chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Please please please update, this story is soooooooooo good and I'd LOVE to see what happens in it.
| cheshire-chan04 chapter 6 . 10/18/2016
omfg please update soon! T_T