Reviews for Awkward Child
Caillian Tyler chapter 23 . 2/20/2017
This is honestly one of the. Best stories I've ever read and somehow want to save it, so that I can read it at a later stage. Thanks so much for this, I don't know if you'll see this but you're an amazing writer and would love to read more of the work crafted by your hands. Keep doing what you're doing! You are literally gifted and all that teenagers and young adults these days need to get into reading and writing. Madlove to you and what you're doing. Top notch story! Feel free to message me on FB (Caillian Tyler van Piggelen) to have a chat. Good work!
A. Nonny Mouse chapter 23 . 1/6/2017
I loved this story. The characters you created were what truly drew me in. I also loved how you handled Trevor. He is still clearly messed up, but around the De Santas and Erica he calms down.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/1/2016
I don't like jaden
Guest chapter 9 . 9/1/2016
I loved trevor
Guest chapter 6 . 8/28/2016
Trever was so sweet
Guest chapter 5 . 8/28/2016
Awe I love this stories tracy
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27/2016
Have her meet trevor
Guest chapter 3 . 8/26/2016
Loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
I love it great job
Craig Docherty chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
Can I Please Have An OC if so this is her description
Long Blond Hair (the usual girls you see in Vine wood)
Blue eyes
Tracys Best Friend
Solomon Richards granddaughter
Jimmys EX
Name: Kayla Richards
scrawlx1012 chapter 18 . 9/18/2015
sweetness...hope Aster appears in the future :)
Guest chapter 12 . 7/23/2015
This story is amazing! And when I say amazing, I'm saying it should be a full blown-out movie! Well, either it'd be a drama movie, or you can add some action, and it'd be 'Max Payne' starring Michael, with a little bit more family feeling to it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Good starting out. And the OC's not a Mary Sue or shit like that! Grand beginnings! If you develope this story correctly, it can, no, will be.. ouch, now I've run out of words to say. But point is, this story's got potential. Unearth it.
TheHeadInCharge chapter 6 . 7/5/2015
I have to say this. I have only read the first six chapters, but I really enjoy this story. I will be sure to read the rest of this one, as well as your sequel story.
jh831 chapter 23 . 3/16/2015
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