This is honestly one of the. Best stories I've ever read and somehow want to save it, so that I can read it at a later stage. Thanks so much for this, I don't know if you'll see this but you're an amazing writer and would love to read more of the work crafted by your hands. Keep doing what you're doing! You are literally gifted and all that teenagers and young adults these days need to get into reading and writing. Madlove to you and what you're doing. Top notch story! Feel free to message me on FB (Caillian Tyler van Piggelen) to have a chat. Good work!

I loved this story. The characters you created were what truly drew me in. I also loved how you handled Trevor. He is still clearly messed up, but around the De Santas and Erica he calms down.

I don't like jaden

I loved trevor

Trever was so sweet

Awe I love this stories tracy

Have her meet trevor

Loved it

I love it great job

Can I Please Have An OC if so this is her description
Long Blond Hair (the usual girls you see in Vine wood)
Blue eyes
20
Tracys Best Friend
Solomon Richards granddaughter
Jimmys EX
Name: Kayla Richards

sweetness...hope Aster appears in the future :)

This story is amazing! And when I say amazing, I'm saying it should be a full blown-out movie! Well, either it'd be a drama movie, or you can add some action, and it'd be 'Max Payne' starring Michael, with a little bit more family feeling to it.

Good starting out. And the OC's not a Mary Sue or shit like that! Grand beginnings! If you develope this story correctly, it can, no, will be.. ouch, now I've run out of words to say. But point is, this story's got potential. Unearth it.

I have to say this. I have only read the first six chapters, but I really enjoy this story. I will be sure to read the rest of this one, as well as your sequel story.

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