Reviews for Burning Retinas
NeneJPhilly chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
In love with this! So funny! It was so amazing! Why'd it have to be so short?!
The Name Is Not Zippy chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
From a comedic stand point, this is VERY funny. There are a few things that need correcting. Beast Boy wouldn't say 'fucked it up,' since when does he have such a dirty mouth? And if this took place a looong way into their relationship, I can imagine it happening, but honestly, if this happened too early, Raven would probably be too offended to forgive him. That's just my take, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
The "You're not a salsa dancer! You don't know me." line. I laughed so hard I couldn't breathe. Hysterical.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
It was nice and sweet. You should do something with it
A lost TT writer chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
This seems eerily familiar to that one scene in the new Teen Titans GO! show. If that was your inspiration, you did a wonderful and funny take/continuation of that. I enjoyed this very much.
Sgt. Cheerleader chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
As George Takei would say... oh my.

On a more serious note, the way you write the dialogue between Beast Boy and Raven sounds very natural. Good work.
HorsemanOTA chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Sweet lord Jesus haha this was super funny loved haha thanks for the laugh
Later Daze
Green Bunny chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
I laughed so hard. OMIGAWD.
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Heheheheh oh this was funny, BB made Raven have both a freak out and what's sure to be a night of pleasure, XD.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.