Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there . You’ve got a true gift for storytelling!

he he he waist deep

I'm very conflicted. Idk if Orochimaru being the final antagonist is better than Tobi. Orochimaru is completely evil unlike Obito who was played. But then I find Kabuto more annoying than Orochimaru.

I'm so glad Hanabi is fine. You should've shown some hizashi & hinata in the mix too. They are afterall a family.

Shit... i hope hanabi ain't dead

Aw.. hell. This is smart use of Zetsu.

Wow.. not expected that at all.

Oh, this will be interesting. Him experimenting on Zetsu.

No way in hell did u skip forward the aftermath! How could u?!
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Is he really given that privilege to take on only one apprentice & not a genin team?

I screamed that fcker tobi appeared!
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That fight was cool but what about rinne birth?

You know... he can actually stick his am back.

This is so good! Never thought direct fight would be so awesome. Still in the village if not I hope you bring Tsunade along with him.

Konan is dead?! That was- idk I though she'd use substitute & survive.

I hope Naruto didn't let all those broken but useful puppets just lying there.

Sasori vs Naruto 2.0?