Damn kinda sad he started his journey to be a puppeteer cause he had no friends and wanted to make some

maybe I've been reading naruto fanfic for too long consecutively, and need to read a different fandom for variety, but despite enjoying this, it taking itself seriously, having real consequences, character arcs, and is actually finished, I'm bored with it.

in any objective manner, it's a good fanfic. well written, few editing mistakes, a work to be proud of.

but I'm still bored, and it feels like it was missing a spark of something. maybe because so many of the main characters had the same dry, jaded and emotionless view as this version of Naruto?

it had a lot of cool moments, an earned power progression, and the fight scenes where written phenomenally.

but I'm bored reading it.
maybe that's a me problem, idk. I wish you luck with your future endeavors, and wherever you are today.

This was such a great read from start to end well done on this.

Never thought I'd see a story in which Sasuke comes off as likable. Always happy to read one of your stories, since you always finish them. :)

Ngl for a sec there i thought ok Evil Naruto who will emulate Sasori and slowly go rogue with konoha 11 puppets but instead you took this a very interesting way and humanized Naruto after all he’s done

i think its best that i stop here, thank you for this story im just scared to read further because i have ne trust in this site and its fictions but this has been a pleasant Suprise

nice

im not sure what you are trying to do with hinata but for a moment i was ready to became to most toxic piece of shit hurman garbage on the internet(more than i am at the moment) but its strange to say this on this site that im not disappointed in this chapter, i hope you will stick around with your decision that naruto is asexual(from what i understant) maybe he can fuck some puppets totally would be better

im going to die why did you have to romance hinata. i though there were no romance in this tag your fucking story's i hate you so much i was enjoying my time reading this but now it all turns to waste im gonna read a few more chapters and see if you are commited to make naruto and hinata fuck, gonna drop it if you do, not that you would care

trying to reopen naruto heh, kında stupid making him go to that "party" wasn't hanabi enough for you. at least you cant romance hanabi as she is too young, i hope

please don't romance hinata. he should memory wipe hanabi and release her since its possible from what i understand

there really was no need for this

why would sasori kill him, his organization literally need him, you cant tell me that sasori of all people with his spy network didn't know naruto had the kyubi in him

is naruto going to die to hanabi by the methods he mentioned ?

i would have been happy if i knew you had the guts to kill your potential love interest you foolish author