I have read this story at least 5 times and this chapter always gets to me

Well I can't believe Ana just simply accepted his apology and everything is rainbows and butterflies again

Wow that was amazing story
Thank you for all your hard work.

Very nice story.
Thank you ;)

solo tengo que decir que Ray no es el padrastro de Ana, el siempre fue y será su papá. Ella no conoció a su padre y Ray le dio su nombre y la crio, eso lo hace su padre, los otros maridos de Carla serían los padrastros mientras ella era menor. Sinceramente, me molesta que repliquen el error de James en la historia original y que lo llame Ray y lo presente cómo padrastro.

I had never read this story but it popped up on me so I decided to read it I couldn't get anything done for reading I so freaking loved it a so what if you made mistakes I knew what you were saying I will read more of your stories too Thank you for such a gripping story !

Cowboy Mom

Wow...what a dick. I would have told him to fuck off and moved out. She now knows what he is like when he gets mad...is she going to have to spend their entire relationship walking on eggshells now waiting for him to lose his shit and act like a cruel asshole again?

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throughout this story I have really laughed in some places . and now I can add crying too. this chapter was wonderful I really adore how you have written the love between Christian and brooklyn. very well done .

I just found this story ,it was really good.
I hope you do finished it

I would rather he had gather them all in thesame room and put them in there place especially Dana.

It's "so I won't LOSE you," not LOOSE. "Loose" means "not tight." Gah!

Love the story wish you would have kept going love it when will the sequel be published beautiful

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"That's when I fell him" Again, proofreading matters.