Reviews for Nursing a broken soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good Elena is tAken out of the equation early into the story great. Now for the hard paper to hook them both up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, such a cute sweet Christian. Will Elena will just be a faded memory in this story? Hope so Another chapter soon, PLEEEASE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great so far x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh they only saw each other briefly. They have to meet again and soon under different circumstances. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good start..holding my interest ...more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its sounds like a great beginning for a story. Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great start to this story. I can wait to read what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Can't wait to see where and how you take it. I think you should be a little more detail oriented. It felt a little rush. Update soon. Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this start! Can't wait! Looking forward to see how this develops :) |