Reviews for The Bitter Hug of Mortality |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I like how Lily loves her son and wants the best for him. I like how you explain why James, Remus and Sirius doesn't feel anything for harry. I hope that he will continue to meet with his brother and sisters (i'm pretty sure that they know that Harry is not a squib). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was reading your author's notes about your father and couldn't help but laugh at the description. He not a mild person, he's karate black belt, a weapons master and Scottish. The last one is very true. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this chapter really did come out quick! The story is certainly unique, and I have no idea what's going to happen next - which is nice since there are far too many predictable fanfics out there. Also, I'm glad you've got the english school system right (primary, secondary, the mention of ofsted) as it always bugs me a little when american terms are used - it's a bit of a pet peeve, I guess. I'm relieved you didn't go for the whole abusive!Potters thing that so many authors do badly, and your Lily and James seem to be like the HP books portrayed them (with room for expansion), so good job :) Have a good time in London, and once again I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited to see this new story. The Peverell's are fascinating and the thought that Harry will be given their gifts will make an interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start am interested to see were it goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks interesting so far - I'm looking forward to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, very interesting. For the first chapter it makes a very good start, especially with the rather unorthodox characters listed. I have yet to read a story involving the Peverell brothers as actual characters, and this one certainly seems like it could turn into something uniquely amazing. Write on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds interesting. I'm looking forward to it. |