Reviews for The Bitter Hug of Mortality
aalens chapter 10 . 8/2/2022
Great story. Harry y being hungry rather than deathly thirsty after hanging around for days was rather odd—and no mention of how the lack of a toilet didn’t make the room
Lireanna chapter 1 . 7/24/2022
PREFACE- IN MY TOP 3 FANFICTION... EVER...I read for pure enjoyment. If don't like something I stop reading it. Simple as that. I am not normally a commenter, and I also don't normally re-read anything because I have a very voracious appetite and I usually prefer something new. THIS IS SPECTACULAR. I Hate reading things that are incomplete because I prefer to read after they are completed. BUT THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD. I have read this multiple times, at least a couple times a year. Those who just don't "like" the story do not need to comment. It's not their preference, ok, but don't turn away potential readers FROM THIS ORIGINAL MAJESTY. I really do hope you continue this eventually, because I think this is amazing and deserves completion in print, outside of your BRILLIANT mind. Thank you so very much.
Diekilles chapter 1 . 6/29/2022
Thank you sir for being direct at the very front with how you planned to go with your story (slash). You’re entirely correct. If you don’t like don’t read. This story isn’t for me admittedly because of that but that’s no reason for people to be hateful. Your prologue was very catchy. I’m sure aside from that one aspect, which is against my preferences it would have been great. Best of luck
Guest chapter 9 . 6/20/2022
NO, Draco doesn't deserve what Harry "took" from Draco..It's sad that you believe a little taunting and name calling is "enough" for Draco to loose a piece of his soul? WTFH is wrong with you and such immaturity and bad writing..

It's weak that you USED Draco as a EXCUSE to show-off Harry's "powers" due to you bias dislike of Draco.. Very Lame!

Also, pairing Harry with ANYONE not LV is stupid writing but so far, THIS chapter is it..
Guest chapter 10 . 6/20/2022
why is he working with Voldemort after he tried to torture him and locked him up, so harry is dark/evil, cause how is the dark a lesser evil than the light, and Voldemort is using him as a spy and controlling his coming and goings and he ended up telling voldie everything anyway even though he didnt want to get involved in the war? im kinda confused with the direction the story is going in? Like what gives voldermort the right to dictate his actions and harry is actually agreeing?
marielike chapter 26 . 4/6/2022
Hi! I wanted to say that I really like your story! It's an unusual take on necromancer!Harry or even his relationship with Death.
I won't ask about when you plan to update next, as I know it can be quite stressful and annoying, but I would like to know if you will be continuing this story. Just so I don't get my hopes up if you don't.
Probably repeating myself but your story is the best one I've read in over six months, so I congratulate you on the great idea and execution! I love stories that have not only a good idea, but are well written. Also ones in which the author does some background research into things like mythology, magical or ritualistic practices and gods they intend to use. You did a great job! I am admittedly not an expert and wouldn't know if anything like names or purpose would be wrong, but it is your work and your story! If you say that this God is shitting sunshine and rainbows, that means he/she is! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise!

It is not strictly necessary, but I really would like a reply to my question if you have one!
Kaiimei chapter 4 . 12/8/2021
Okay, the fact Harry is that old and yet apparently doesn't have control over himself enough to not talk to the ghosts when other people are around is baffling to me.

I get that in Little Hangleton being seen as odd is par for the course, but he should have better control over himself than to speak to the ghosts when a wizard is literally right in front of him, that just seems genuinely baffling to me.
moonprincess97524 chapter 27 . 11/26/2021
This is a wonderful story. Thank you for the reminder of which gods you are talking about, I tried to do a lookup online to see if a bit more info was available but as I couldn't remember which gods you were referring to I didn't have any luck. I love that Harry named the hell hounds and was able to play with them. I am really looking forward to Dumbles getting his just desserts. Again I love this wonderful story.
moonprincess97524 chapter 19 . 11/25/2021
A god of youth? never heard of one, cool.
moonprincess97524 chapter 9 . 11/22/2021
Okay, Sims 2 can be fun. I love this chapter the conversations that he had with Barty and Draco were wonderful. I think that Draco might have gotten off a little light, but then I have no clue what Harry can do with what he has so... This is a wonderful story.
PurposeUnknown chapter 23 . 11/10/2021
Fun facts:
1. Hippopotamuses milk is actually pink.
2. There is no number before one thousand (negative numbers not included) that has the letter ‘a’ in it.
PlantEnbyFern chapter 27 . 11/4/2021
two years w/o ur wonderful writing
Guest chapter 27 . 10/31/2021
Not logged in as I don't have a FFN account, sorry.

I deeply adore this fic and have enjoyed reading it. I like what you made and set up, and it's genuinely interesting.

Thank you for writing it.
MasterOfDeath7 chapter 24 . 9/29/2021
I refuse to believe that Death couldn't have made a surprise entrance from a shadow in the corner of Voldemort's office and put Voldemort down... The God that subdued the God's of Life and the Afterlife with a wave of his hand couldn't prevent a mortal Wizard from harming someone he cared about... Plot has gone downhill.
Lireanna chapter 27 . 9/5/2021
please continue this. im more of a "reading when finished" gal, but I've had this saved and followed for ages. I just read what youve written... again. I want more. I love that you are bringing the old gods into play and the whole light/dark balance. just lovely.
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