Reviews for Take Two |
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![]() ![]() this is so great i love Tsukishima he is sooo great plis pis plis more |
![]() ![]() Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls updaaaaaate. I want to know what happened |
![]() ![]() Please for the love of all that's holy, please, PLEASE! Update this amazing fic! I know it's been a super long time but trust me amigo you still have lots of people waiting to see what happens next. These types of fics are the ones I literally die for and it's so well-written too! The emotions are really well-demonstrated and the pace of the story is just right. Update please! *waves cookie to bribe you* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! This story has so much potential! I'd love for you to include Nekoma and Fukurodani in this story as well! Oh yeah, here's another thing: try to make the chapters as long as you can; I've found that readers like long chapters! One last tip: try to include other characters more, it helps with emotions and readers like to have different perspectives! Can't wait to read more! Keep at it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn this awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh this is so good! |
![]() ![]() I'm dying this is so angsty and perfect. |
![]() ![]() This is absolutely amazing! I LOVE angst fics about Tsukishima...there aren't nearly enough. I hope you end up finishing this story some day; I'd love to read more! Poor baby...thinking he doesn't deserve to be loved. You write his inner conflict so well! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my GOSH! This is amazing! The way you've portrayed Kei is beautifully written and the way the conflict is tearing him apart is very realistic! Ahhhhh! Also, he's not overly sappy and his emotions are going haywire, plus the fact that he's noticeably different, yet not pitiable, at school, just tops the cake! I could go ON and ON about this fic for ages! This is by FAR the best fic I've read in Haikyuu, ESPECIALLY for the Tsukishamas! Great, now I've got to search through the catacombs of fics for this good of Kei family angst! But please, I beg of you, continue this fic! It's so well written and has SO MUCH potential that I'm dying for more! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() I'm in tears. I love Kei so much, I do. I want to give him a hug. So bad. I want him to feel safe and I want him to tell everybody what's going on so they can help him, but I get it. Fuck, I relate so much. So, so fucking much. I.. I'm speechless. I hope this picks up again so Kei can get the happy ending he deserves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess you wont continue this story anymore? even though this is a super great storyyy. I want kei to open up more. well, im still glad I found this story~ and I really hope u can continue thisss |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone, tsukki will be okay. Hopefully. Please be okay tsukki. I feel a suprise visit will be happening sooner than later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brother has woken up yah. Tsukki it good news for you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Tsukki my baby you are most definitely not okay. |